【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 e true, give up, such as等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。7．（黑龍江中考模擬）書面表達假如你是Jack，中學英文報 WARM HEART專欄的編輯，近期你收到一封署名為 Asking的求助信，該同學在信中訴說了自己當前焦慮的情緒，請根據(jù)以下信息，給他寫一封回信。寫作要點：1. 表達你對他的理解并給予安慰。2. 求助人焦慮情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。（1）下周將要進行期末考試。（2）盡管準備了很長時間，對成績?nèi)詻]有把握。3. 為他如何消除考前焦慮提出具體建議并說明理由。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實姓名、地名和學校名。2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Hi, Asking,I’m the editor of WARM HEART. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對某位同學考前焦慮進行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級，the+比較級，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語放句首，用半倒裝。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（山東中考模擬） 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學生家長的博客進行回復。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（江蘇中考模擬）加入你是英國交流學生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 兩個月的學習生活即將結(jié)束。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。216。 what you39。ve learned about Chinese culture216。 how the teachers and students help you216。 what your homestay family do for you注意：1. 對所有要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，感謝信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。文章時態(tài)用一般過去時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。【點睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假設你是某英文報紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來信。她在信中訴說了她的煩惱，請你根據(jù)Lucy的來信，用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理,信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.H