【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 e true, give up, such as等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。7．（黑龍江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是Jack，中學(xué)英文報(bào) WARM HEART專(zhuān)欄的編輯，近期你收到一封署名為 Asking的求助信，該同學(xué)在信中訴說(shuō)了自己當(dāng)前焦慮的情緒，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，給他寫(xiě)一封回信。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 表達(dá)你對(duì)他的理解并給予安慰。2. 求助人焦慮情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。（1）下周將要進(jìn)行期末考試。（2）盡管準(zhǔn)備了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，對(duì)成績(jī)?nèi)詻](méi)有把握。3. 為他如何消除考前焦慮提出具體建議并說(shuō)明理由。寫(xiě)作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Hi, Asking,I’m the editor of WARM HEART. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對(duì)某位同學(xué)考前焦慮進(jìn)行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語(yǔ)放句首，用半倒裝。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（山東中考模擬） 寫(xiě)作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭表明自己的看法，接下來(lái)陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（江蘇中考模擬）加入你是英國(guó)交流學(xué)生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 兩個(gè)月的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封感謝信。216。 what you39。ve learned about Chinese culture216。 how the teachers and students help you216。 what your homestay family do for you注意：1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，感謝信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封感謝信。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是某英文報(bào)紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來(lái)信。她在信中訴說(shuō)了她的煩惱，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)Lucy的來(lái)信，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封90詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理,信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.H