【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 deep love.I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice , I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano I learned the piano from my teacher there.Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for advised my father to give my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn39。t give up. I was moved by my father39。s encourgement. 【解析】【詳解】本文是關(guān)于自己經(jīng)歷或看到的故事為話題的材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點來寫作。學(xué)生首先要認真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關(guān)信息,認真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時還要注意:；,使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫；,有無拼寫錯誤等。高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father39。s love for me, warm and deep ，從這件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸對我的愛，溫暖而深沉的愛。Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice ，爸爸說帶我去一個好地方。But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn39。t ，沒關(guān)系?！军c睛】注意寫作過程中，將要點展開并表達清楚，注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達。9．（遼寧中考模擬）（B）按要求完成大作文（80詞左右）節(jié)約資源，保護環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起。假設(shè)你是一個注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生，請以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文，簡單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式。寫作要求：詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，不得透露姓名等個人信息?！敬鸢浮縈y Green LifeAs the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.【解析】【分析】本文主題關(guān)于綠色生活，環(huán)境保護，注意文章內(nèi)容?！驹斀狻渴紫赛c明如今的生活環(huán)境，越來越差，綠色生活勢在必行。其次點明綠色生活的重要性。然后說我在日常生活中對綠色出行作出的貢獻，騎自行車，出門關(guān)燈等。最后呼吁大家一起努力?！军c睛】首先正確理解作文題目，不要偏題，本文是關(guān)于綠色生活，它的重要性，以及你在日常生活中是如何踐行綠色生活的。其次，在語句正確的基礎(chǔ)上，多運用連詞，使文章升華，長短句結(jié)合，使文章更上一檔次。10．（四川中考模擬） 書面表達本周你們班召開了一次主題班會“畢業(yè)前，我能為學(xué)校做些什么？”大家踴躍發(fā)言，作為第三小組成員，請你根據(jù)各小組的情況匯報以及你們小組的討論情況，寫一個總結(jié)交給老師。第一小組把我們用過的書本和學(xué)習(xí)用品贈送給七年級、八年級的弟弟妹妹， 尤其是家庭貧困的同學(xué)。第二小組籌錢，為學(xué)校圖書館購買書籍。第三小組......提示詞： 贈送 present 用過的 used注意：1. 字數(shù)不少于80詞；2. 補充好本小組討論情況；3. 要點完整，層次清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、地名、校名等。What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.【答案】What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片書面表達要求學(xué)生寫出一個班會會后的總結(jié)?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇材料作文。表格中一個兩個組的討論結(jié)果，第三組是需要考生圍繞著主題自己補充的，盡量避免與前面兩組重復(fù)。我們可以按照總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)來寫。 首先引出此次班會的主題；其次分別寫出三個小組的討論結(jié)果；最后可以對三個小組進行總結(jié)，表達情感。在語言上要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。11．（河北中考模擬）為了讓同學(xué)們認識到安全的重要性，網(wǎng)上進行了一項安全問題調(diào)查。以下是100名 學(xué)生傷亡的原因，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語寫篇調(diào)查報告，就中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)如何做好自我保 護這一問題談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要求?0詞左右。題目自擬，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。PercentageThe placeThe reason63%Streets or roadsCar accident18%Rivers or lakesSwimming without adults10%Food stalls （攤點）Unhealthy snacks9%School yardsInjury while playing or exercising____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Report on Children’s Injury and DeathRecently we did a survey among 100 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Here’s the result of our survey.Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 students were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many rules should be made to reduce this kind of accidents. In one word, safety is a big problem. All of us should look out.After all, life is not a small matter.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。為了讓同學(xué)們認識到安全的重要性，網(wǎng)上對100名學(xué)生的傷亡原因進行了一項安全問題調(diào)查。要求根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示用英語寫篇調(diào)查報告，就中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)如何做好自我保護這一問題談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā１疚臅r態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，要注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性；要將表格內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達出來，要涵蓋表格中提到的所有要點，同時注意理順要點，防止漏寫。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。12．（全國中考模擬）書面表達健康的生活習(xí)慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。信息提