【文章內容簡介】 【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談談你對目前最環(huán)保的運動方式 （plogging） 的認識以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者。【詳解】：本篇材料作文要求以第一人稱，談談自己對目前最環(huán)保的運動方式 （plogging） 的認識以及結合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談談怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國，健康中國的踐行者；陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時要文句通順，內容完整。：本例文結構嚴謹，層次分明。開篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運動是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運動方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結全文。文章布局合理，內容完整連貫。：高分短語： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時）；關注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結構；書寫時要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當。8．（遼寧中考模擬）現(xiàn)在手機是人們生活的必需品，在給我們提供便利的同時，也有很多負面作用。很多人成了“手機控”。請你根據(jù)要求談談對自己的看法：1. 手機的正面作用；2. 手機給人們帶來的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機控”?！敬鸢浮?Phones can help us municate more easily and know about what39。s happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won39。t have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇開放性話題作文，針對很多人成了“手機控”這一現(xiàn)象，結合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談一談自己的觀點?？忌紫纫喿x前面的提示去認真審題，確定出文章的中心，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來表達。要求從三個方面去完成寫作：1. 手機的正面作用；2. 手機給人們帶來的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機控”。需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，比如手機的正面作用可以寫有利于我們的溝通與交流，通過上網(wǎng)了解世界上所發(fā)生的事情，手機的負面作用可以寫手機對健康的危害，對學生學習的影響等等。最后總結并發(fā)出呼吁。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。9．（北京中考模擬）“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談談你的感受?提示詞語: diligence （勤奮）, make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信，在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?！靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習得越多，就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級，the+比較級”結構。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。10．（山東中考模擬）書面表達。根據(jù)下列圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文，要求敘述完整。 1 2 34 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 . We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們在一次爬山過程中保護環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾。【詳解】結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。【點睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們決定去爬山，接下來介紹我們在山頂上發(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾，然后撿拾垃圾，最后表達我們的感受。此處set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。11．（西安市鐵一中學中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學習以外的事