【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 個(gè)人的事業(yè)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢(mèng)想。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫， 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)（姓名、校名和地名等）；4. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others. To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for am going to read a are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their ’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢(mèng)想。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（武漢外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)長(zhǎng)跑是人們熱衷的體育活動(dòng)之一。武漢馬拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因獨(dú)具特色的賽道及賽事組織已成為一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom想知道關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。請(qǐng)用英文給他回一封電子郵件，介紹這項(xiàng)賽事。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：；，人們可以強(qiáng)身健體，還可以結(jié)識(shí)新朋友；，吸引了很多人的關(guān)注；,如：中山大道、東湖綠道、黃鶴樓，被視為最美的馬拉松賽道；。注意：；，郵件的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；，不要逐條翻譯參考詞匯： event track Greenway Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.I think the people in Wuhan likes the of them want to take part in it.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Tom寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，給他介紹關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，我們可以按照這些提示來(lái)組織語(yǔ)言，并增加一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)。其中第五條需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)的個(gè)人想法，這一部分是不受限制的，學(xué)生們可以自由發(fā)揮，但需要注意內(nèi)容需要與全文大意連貫起來(lái)。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要靈活運(yùn)用，并使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)需注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯題目中的內(nèi)容，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型。在文章中還應(yīng)使用一、兩個(gè)高級(jí)句型或復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Tom寫(xiě)電子郵件，介紹了關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的事情。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并對(duì)信息進(jìn)行加工、處理和補(bǔ)充，使文意更加清楚、連貫。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，個(gè)別句子使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。文章句式以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，穿插使用了復(fù)雜句式，如賓語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等。調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。文章中使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the 。9．（上海市澧溪中學(xué)初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）當(dāng)昨日重現(xiàn)之時(shí)，在腦海里的都是回憶。記憶中有沒(méi)有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。請(qǐng)選取一個(gè)方面，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）The following is for reference only（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意選取一個(gè)給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。：例文采用三段式：用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容：時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去式為主，敘述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷，敘述完整清晰。：短語(yǔ)：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。句型：such…that…；so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；whenever…引導(dǎo)的從句；used to do。10．（黑龍江中考模擬）Writing現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來(lái)越多，有的孩子很小的時(shí)候就戴上了眼鏡。從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全國(guó)愛(ài)眼日”。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫(xiě)一篇題目為“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。內(nèi)容：（1）眼睛的重要性；（2）保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間讀書(shū)看報(bào)；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書(shū)；③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。要求：（1）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。2）要求字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。It’s important to protect our eyes___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s important to protect our eyesThe ey