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o protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使語言表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5. 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,也是社會主義核心價值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機所困擾。上周末,他本來和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影,但是他卻因為在家復習考試,把這件事忘了,直到第二天才想起來。因此,Lingling很生氣,并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請你就此事給校報投稿,以“The Importance of Promise”為題,內(nèi)容要點如下:簡述事件;談談自己的看法,并給Daming一些建議。注意:詞數(shù)80—100;行文連貫,邏輯合理;文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名; 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強調(diào)) the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強調(diào))the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫作過程中,注意文章結(jié)構,先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說自己對此的看法。【詳解】首先,第一句話直接點明作者的觀點,大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法,不信守承諾會導致失去別人的信任,對大明的建議是除了認錯之外,還需要再次保證永不再犯?!军c睛】文章結(jié)構清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點,然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴密。除此之外,中間也使用了一些連接詞,例如but,so,because of等,使文章更加通順。6.馬上要初中畢業(yè)了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場“My Life At School” 主題 班會 , 邀請全班同學參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶; ;; 。不開心的事情; 。未來展望1. 升上理想的學校;2. 能結(jié)識更多朋友;3. 請你補充(至少兩點)My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。s unbelievable that I39。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do be