【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話(huà)對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體。文章中的語(yǔ)句以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語(yǔ)和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。5．寫(xiě)作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶(hù)外活動(dòng)。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話(huà)題，結(jié)合所給的寫(xiě)作材料，寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)刊征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)你將代表你校2009屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿（考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)）。注意：1. 90詞左右。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；發(fā)言稿不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。 efforts, our parents39。 support and our classmates39。 help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our de