【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。8．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括：讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點內(nèi)容重復(fù)）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)。100詞左右（文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌憽５谝欢我獙懣傮w交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。【詳解】，看看有哪些要求？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點。【點睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9．（浙江中考模擬） 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召，麗水市中小學(xué)開展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動。請你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……（至少2條）注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并給了一些提示和注意事項：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，要用上提示詞，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，最后寫出你的觀點。注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意單詞拼寫，不要犯單詞拼寫錯誤，字數(shù)要符合要求?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，沒有單詞拼寫錯誤，字數(shù)符合題目要求。10．（遼寧中考模擬）現(xiàn)在手機是人們生活的必需品，在給我們提供便利的同時，也有很多負面作用。很多人成了“手機控”。請你根據(jù)要求談?wù)剬ψ约旱目捶ǎ?. 手機的正面作用；2. 手機給人們帶來的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機控”。【答案】 Phones can help us municate more easily and know about what39。s happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won39。t have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇開放性話題作文，針對很多人成了“手機控”這一現(xiàn)象，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談一談自己的觀點?？忌紫纫喿x前面的提示去認真審題，確定出文章的中心，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來表達。要求從三個方面去完成寫作：1. 手機的正面作用；2. 手機給人們帶來的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機控”。需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，比如手機的正面作用可以寫有利于我們的溝通與交流，通過上網(wǎng)了解世界上所發(fā)生的事情，手機的負面作用可以寫手機對健康的危害，對學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的影響等等。最后總結(jié)并發(fā)出呼吁。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。11．（江蘇中考模擬）臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評和組評活動，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長，請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價，寫一 份素質(zhì)報告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認為看書有很多好處（請列舉2個好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實際情況提2點建議）…要求：表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he