【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同時For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。9．（揚州市江都區(qū)第三中學中考模擬）畢業(yè)之際，學校要求每位九年級學生給各自家長寫封信，簡要匯報三年來初中生活的收獲與存在的問題。假如你是Jim,請根據(jù)下表的提示，用英文做一個簡短的匯報。收獲1. 學到很多知識…2. 學會了與人相處：在校...,在家…3. 遇到困難時…存在問題學習壓力…目前想法1. 感謝 2…要求：（1）：表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）：必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；（3）：不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。（4）：詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jim【答案】例文Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.Yours sincerelyJim【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。在畢業(yè)之際，學校要求每位九年級學生給各自家長寫封信，簡要匯報三年來初中生活的收獲與存在的問題。假如你是Jim，要求根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容，用英文做一個簡短的匯報。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作過程中，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達為了解學生們的職業(yè)觀，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)表格中的結(jié)果，寫一篇英語調(diào)查報告，并且結(jié)合實際情況，談談你對未來工作的選擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并談談自己的未來工作選擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。s lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That39。s because I love children and I love English, too.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇調(diào)查報告。文章要按照題目要求，根據(jù)提綱中所給的信息完成短文，短文句中時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，句中的主要是第三人稱，句中使用了一些固定短語和句中結(jié)果，例如，would like to do sth. in the future。 be happy with。 hope to do sth. as well as。 think about。 in my opinion。此外文章使用了一些主從復合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請你向他發(fā)出邀請，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，邀請對方并給出建議，需使用表達邀請和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語和句式，注意長短搭配，并在行文中增加細節(jié)和過渡，使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認真分析提示要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累和寫作練習以外，還應該適當背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a piic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，e back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the going to結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。12．（北京中考模擬）為了幫助同學們樹立集體觀念和提高班級責任感，你校英文報刊正在以“ Building a Harmonious Class” （創(chuàng)建和諧班級）為題征文，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談班級成 員應該如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體，作為一名成員，你通常是怎么做的，以及還需要再做些什么。提示詞語: important, respect, trust, help提示問題： ● Why should we build a harmonious class?● As a member of a class, what do you usually do?● What else do you need to do?We should build a harmonious class because ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad