【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 her. So I think I should listen to my parents. No cross, no crown.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的父母對你在學(xué)習(xí)、衛(wèi)生、作息上的要求是什么。主要從你對此有什么看法，以及你是怎樣解決的，這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縏his means I won’t have enough time to play. 這意味著我沒有足夠的時(shí)間玩。句子I won’t have enough time to ?！靖叻志湫投縄 don’t really understand why they ask me to do so. 我真的不明白他們?yōu)槭裁匆疫@么做。句子why they ask me to do so. 是由why引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。8．（河北中考模擬）請以“Never Give Up”為題,寫一篇短文,簡要描述圖中的三個(gè)畫面,并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?要求:1. 文中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名,校名和地名?2. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順?3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)詞左右,已給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?提示詞:the long distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practiceNever Give UpThe . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Never Give Up The . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do longdistance running. After school they run on the playground together. They pete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result. Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the . exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，題目中有三張圖片，展示了九年級的學(xué)生們在為體育測試做準(zhǔn)備，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)圖片，以Never give up為題，寫一篇文章，簡要描述三個(gè)畫面，并談一談自己的想法。寫作之前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，看清楚圖片展示的內(nèi)容，三張圖片展示了三個(gè)體育項(xiàng)目，跑步、鉛球和跳遠(yuǎn)，寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)使用形象、直觀的語言，詳細(xì)介紹圖片中的內(nèi)容，然后組織語言，串聯(lián)成文。文章可以分兩段，第一段介紹圖片內(nèi)容，第二段談?wù)撟约旱南敕?。題目中有詞匯的提示，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意使用。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要確定應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)。注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文的描述符合圖片中的內(nèi)容，敘述非常詳細(xì)，并對圖片展開了合理的想象，使文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題。其次短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，語法規(guī)范，語言得體。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句等復(fù)合句，提升了文章檔次和水平，整篇文章表達(dá)流暢。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認(rèn)識和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（四川中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)在你的成長過程中,許多人、許多事物一直在陪伴著你、支持著你、溫暖著你,讓你感動、伴你成長。請以“Say thanks to________”為題,寫一篇短文。要求: 1. 寫出要感謝的對象、原因及感激語言；,語意通順、連貫。,書寫工整、規(guī)范。、校名和地名。Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to fort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】 話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)