【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 人稱來(lái)敘述講成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過(guò)程描寫完整且條理清晰。：短語(yǔ)：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。句型：被動(dòng)句型。8．（北京初三）題目2：常言道，“一分耕耘，一分收獲”這告訴我們凡事只有付出努力，才能取得成功。 假如你是李華，你校英文雜志正在開展以“付出與收獲”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀銈€(gè)人的一次經(jīng)歷：你付出了什么努力？取得了什么收獲？有何感悟？提示詞語(yǔ)：weak，spend，progress，keep trying提示問(wèn)題：— What did you do?—What did you achieve?—What did you learn from the experience? 【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.【解析】【分析】本篇短文關(guān)于“付出與收獲”，學(xué)生可以通過(guò)自己的日常經(jīng)歷，來(lái)寫付出了什么，中間是怎么努力的，以及最后從這段經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了什么?！驹斀狻勘疚膶懥俗约阂婚_始不擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)，在自己的努力下，英語(yǔ)成績(jī)?nèi)〉昧诉M(jìn)步，每天聽英語(yǔ)，閱讀英語(yǔ)，也嘗試著看一些英文電影，經(jīng)過(guò)幾個(gè)月的努力，英語(yǔ)成績(jī)有所提升。通過(guò)這件事意識(shí)到，只要肯努力，沒有什么是做不成的。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（江蘇中考模擬） 近年來(lái)，隨著智能手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生開始使用手機(jī)來(lái)完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論，為此，英文報(bào)Teens 將在下期開設(shè)專欄討論這一話題，你采訪了一些同學(xué)，寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下：支持者反對(duì)者學(xué)生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機(jī)操練說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。自從使用手機(jī)以來(lái)，視力變差。一個(gè)理由……（12句）一個(gè)理由……（12句）你喜歡在用app學(xué)習(xí)嗎？給出你的理由……（23句），要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；；，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；，寫在試卷其他部位無(wú)效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干，這是屬于看法類的作文，那么在寫這類作文時(shí)，首先要分別寫出支持和反對(duì)兩方面的看法及原因，最后要說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來(lái)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：practice doing ；learn by oneself自學(xué)；lead to導(dǎo)致；it is adj. for us to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)，做某事是怎樣的；in a proper way以適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞?。亮點(diǎn)句型：There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ，這使我們更容易自己學(xué)習(xí)。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機(jī)以來(lái)，他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。10．（江西中考模擬）健康的體魄離不開好的生活習(xí)慣。同樣，對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)優(yōu)異成績(jī)的取得也需要好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＬ崾荆?. 養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的好處；2. 學(xué)生中不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的表現(xiàn)；3. 對(duì)養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議（至少提三條建議）。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上提示要點(diǎn)可以，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 90詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to Develop Good Study Habits Every student wants to study well, but it′s not 【答案】How to Develop Good Study HabitsEvery student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you aren39。t feeling sleepy. Second, find a fortable place to study, but not too fortable or you may go to sleep! Third, you39。d better ask for help when having trouble studying.Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then you’ll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫出如何培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣?！驹斀狻靠忌鶕?jù)提示的3點(diǎn)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。在內(nèi)容方面，首先要寫出好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的好處，也就是為什么要培養(yǎng)好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；其次是在學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)現(xiàn)的不好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；最后提出自己對(duì)養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議；在語(yǔ)言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，簡(jiǎn)潔無(wú)錯(cuò)；在規(guī)范方面，注意單詞拼寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)防護(hù)好的正確使用。11．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)你看過(guò)中央電視臺(tái)董卿主持的節(jié)目《朗讀者》嗎？這是一檔非常受歡迎的節(jié)目，讓我們看到生活中讀書的美好、讀書的重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中所列的要點(diǎn)，以“Growing Up with Reading”為題寫一篇短文。要求：1．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順；2．短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；文章開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【答案】Have you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy.Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading bee a part of our life!【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文，也是話題作文，話題是“讀書伴我成長(zhǎng)”，以“Growing Up with Reading（讀書伴我成長(zhǎng)）”為題寫一篇短文。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱，本文給詞的要點(diǎn)就是提綱，把要點(diǎn)中的重要短語(yǔ)翻譯成英文：the beauty and the importance/ get knowledge/ open our minds/ makes us confident and happy/ proper books that can improve ourselves/ read in a right way/ think about more/ spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time/ develop a reading habit./ Let’s grow up with reading. Let readin