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就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7.(寧夏銀川二中中考模擬)假設(shè)你是李華。上周末你和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場郊游,大家玩的很開心。請你通過將此活動(dòng)過程告知你的好友Tom,并簡要談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要點(diǎn)如下:The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出發(fā)。下午5:00返回。Where學(xué)校大門口集合。綠色農(nóng)場效游。How乘坐校車。What野炊、摘西紅柿,放風(fēng)箏等(至少提及三項(xiàng)活動(dòng))?!璖afety tips不要到河里游泳;不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)……:參考詞匯:get close to the nature(親近大自然)寫作要求:詞數(shù)60-80;(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或人名;所給的要點(diǎn)必須都用上;緊扣主題,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Dear Tom,How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear TomHow’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd came back at 5:00 in the met at the school went there by school bus . We had a piic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything had a chance to get close to the had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己上周末和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場郊游,大家玩的很開心。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般過去時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。8.(浙江中考模擬)書面表達(dá) 假如你是Li Ming, 最近你的英國筆友Susan要來溫州體驗(yàn)中國的傳統(tǒng)文化,請你為Susan設(shè)計(jì)溫州一日游的活動(dòng),幫助她體驗(yàn)溫州的文化習(xí)俗。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給她寫一封電子郵件:;;要求:1. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人身份信息;2. 詞數(shù):110詞左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Susan,I’m glad to hear that you are ing to Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Susan,I’m glad to hear that you are ing to Wenzhou soon, where there are lots of places of interest. To experience traditional Chinese culture better, We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along Wenzhou Road. I bet you will be attracted. Along the Wenzhou Road.not only can you watch the wonderful scenery, but also you will find many historical relics, from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture. Sincerely waiting for your ing! Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給她寫一封電子郵件。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí),注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求。9.(吉林省實(shí)驗(yàn)中考模擬)(B) 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中,主持人在開場白中說道:“我們的一生,會(huì)經(jīng)歷很多的第一次,難忘而又寶貴,它意味著我們的成長?!闭堈?wù)勀闳松凶铍y忘的“第一次”,或許是第一次做家務(wù)、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說說你從中學(xué)到了什么或有哪些收獲。不少于80詞。(文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名)【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。t know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn39。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文,需要寫出第一次做某事,人生中有許多第一次,可以挑選一件讓自己感覺深刻,并且從中學(xué)到了許多東西的事件來寫,這樣的話,貼近生活實(shí)際,學(xué)生有話可說?!驹斀狻勘疚膶懥宋业牡谝淮巫鲲?,先交代背景知識,因?yàn)楦改覆辉诩?,所以我不得不自己?dòng)手,動(dòng)手做的過程中,由于沒有經(jīng)驗(yàn),理所當(dāng)然地失敗了。但是,我不能氣餒,要從失敗中找原因,從哪里跌倒,就從哪里起來,所以,第二周,我讓媽媽教我做菜,獲得了成功,而且知道了,只要不放棄,就能獲得成功。【點(diǎn)睛】本篇作文貼近實(shí)際,每個(gè)人都有第一次,挑選一件自己有話可說的來寫即可。但是需要注意文章邏輯,語篇順序,注意連接詞的使用和長短句結(jié)合。這樣的話,文章符合英文造句習(xí)慣,更容易獲得高分。10.(山東中考模擬)假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席, 你校學(xué)生會(huì)打算以“保護(hù)環(huán)境”為主題搞 一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐。請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一封倡議書。要點(diǎn)如下:,多走路。,塑料袋。,多植樹。要求:1詞數(shù):80100;,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?!敬鸢浮緿ear classmates,As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting one of us must do something to help save our ,transportation is the main factor of air we should walk more instead of ,industrial pollution is water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water ,we should stop using plastic bags when we go ,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our earth.The Students’ Union【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席, 你校學(xué)生會(huì)打算以“保護(hù)環(huán)境”為主題搞 一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐。請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一封倡議書。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。11.(湖北中考模擬)在“讓夢想照進(jìn)現(xiàn)實(shí)”的主題班會(huì)上,同學(xué)們暢談了自己在初中的變化及種種經(jīng)歷。李浩也講述了自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷。假如你是李浩,請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),用英語寫出李浩的發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)如下:,對英語沒什么興趣,上課很少舉手發(fā)言。,曾經(jīng)很沮喪,想放棄英語。,自己開始認(rèn)真對待英語學(xué)習(xí)。,英語水平有較大的提高。(一兩點(diǎn))注意:詞數(shù)60—80,文章的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯: adv. 很少,不常 up 舉起Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here 【答案】Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here. My name is Li Jie. I used to be an extremely shy and introverted girl and was not interested in English. I seldom raised my hand in class. As a result, I often failed in English exams. I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English. It39。s you, my classmates, who helped me in time. So I began to take English learning seriously.Over the past two years, I think my English has improved a lot. I dreamed to study in an Englishspeaking country and I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country. I think my English will make great progress there.Thank you.【解析】【分析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如be glad to do,talk about,used to be,be interested in,as a result,at the party,give up,dream to do等。文中I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English./It39。s you, my classmates, who helped me in time./I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful