【正文】 北京中。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我們會(huì)為我們自己和我們的國(guó)家贏得尊重），簡(jiǎn)練，完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。借助first, second等詞串聯(lián)起自己的觀點(diǎn)?！癰ad manners”表示禮貌狀況不好，然后講到了這些行為對(duì)中國(guó)的名聲有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），這里用到了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，表示傷害已經(jīng)造成了，產(chǎn)生了不好的影響，時(shí)態(tài)的妙用是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候可以適當(dāng)借助祈使句來(lái)表示“不應(yīng)該做…”，需要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)姆绞揭胛恼?，銜接好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。注意：1. 文章必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)80左右； 3. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we39。 3 、保護(hù)文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。1 、保護(hù)環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。直接影響著中國(guó)“禮儀之邦”之形象。18．（寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。向子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。以下是你所在班級(jí)的討論情況，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)投稿，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕?。“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”這一新的學(xué)習(xí)模式備受青睞。17．（s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞。提示：1. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；2. 待人有禮，樂(lè)于助人；3. 遵守交通規(guī)則；4. 寫(xiě)出1到2條自己的觀點(diǎn)。湖北中考模擬）為配合我市開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。要求以The person I want to thank為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：誰(shuí)是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學(xué)到了什么？根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱和第三人稱。 love, encourage, take care of, 請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：誰(shuí)是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學(xué)到了什么？提示詞語(yǔ): mother, 假如你是李華，在你的生活中一定有人給予你無(wú)私的愛(ài)和幫助。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫(xiě)作。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。） 每一個(gè)生命個(gè)體都和這個(gè)世界發(fā)生著聯(lián)系，你也不例外。14．（還有一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do learn more knowledge等等。m terribly sorry I couldn39。文章中簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，句式不單調(diào)，有節(jié)奏感。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。短文共分三段，第一段介紹了自己沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)郵件的原因，用了一句話簡(jiǎn)潔、明了。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文講的是暑假的計(jì)劃，應(yīng)主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，be going to結(jié)構(gòu)或者will+動(dòng)詞原形都可以。首先應(yīng)注意內(nèi)容的完整，要包含題目中要求的所有要點(diǎn)，題目只是列出了一個(gè)提綱，沒(méi)有規(guī)定要學(xué)生寫(xiě)什么，因此具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己來(lái)發(fā)揮，理由要充分、合理，暑假安排要符合日常生活和學(xué)生的身份。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for theexams.I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promiseto send you some wonderful photos then.I’m going to do something meaningful during the ing summer holiday. First, I plan to dosome volunteer work in my munity. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn moreknowledge.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫(xiě)信，內(nèi)容包括：你沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)他的郵件的原因；你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里的其他安排。t reply to your in time because __________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear JimI39。提示詞語(yǔ): exams, go on a trip， volunteer， visit some museums提示問(wèn)題： ? Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s in time?? Where do you plan to travel?? What are your other plans for the summer holiday?To: JimFrom: Li HuaSubject: A planDear Jim,I39。北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友 Jim 一周前給你發(fā)了電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你暑假里的旅游計(jì)劃及其他安排， 但由于某種原因你沒(méi)有及時(shí)回復(fù)。此處set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 1 2 34 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 . We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們?cè)谝淮闻郎竭^(guò)程中保護(hù)環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾。山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)