【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 rrived, there were a lot of visitors.In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas, giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫參觀日記。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。為了使語言更顯親切，在寫作時(shí)主語用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主。同時(shí)注意時(shí)間狀語與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤，做到語意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求，結(jié)合所給材料確定內(nèi)容，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)對考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。8．（江蘇中考模擬）目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對此人們有不同的看法。請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。 贊成者的觀點(diǎn)1. 能夠?qū)W得更好，考試考得更好，上更好的高中；2. 避免花太多時(shí)間看電視、玩游戲。反對者的觀點(diǎn)1. 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息；2. 壓力過大不利于身體健康。你的觀點(diǎn)1. 課堂上好好學(xué)就足夠了，補(bǔ)課不必要；2. 課后可以自己......注意：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法通順，上下文連貫；2. 必須包括提示的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)；3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班贊同者的觀點(diǎn)。第三段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班反對者的觀點(diǎn)。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮?？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語、句型：all kinds of ，Some others，As for me ，Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分四段寫：總體簡單描述話題；贊成；反對；你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)80左右。One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇話題作文。【詳解】根據(jù)題干““苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情?！币罂芍?，本文用一般過去時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——我將介紹曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。這些內(nèi)容用一般過去時(shí)，注意動(dòng)詞的過去式變形。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我為自己感到驕傲。10．（靖江市靖城中學(xué)中考模擬）九年寒窗苦，六月備考忙。對于即將到來的中考，同學(xué)們既有期盼也有壓力。為了讓同學(xué)們學(xué)得開心，學(xué)有信心，我校英文報(bào)刊將開展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比賽，請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，用英語簡要描述并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下表：現(xiàn)狀概述由于課業(yè)繁重，學(xué)生壓力較大。更注重學(xué)生的語言能力，學(xué)生難得高分，因此有些學(xué)生可能灰心。同學(xué)建議我們不僅要勤奮努力，更要改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法。應(yīng)該認(rèn)真計(jì)劃好時(shí)間，以便在學(xué)業(yè)和愛好間取得平衡。你的建議……（12點(diǎn)，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意事項(xiàng)：1. 征文須包含表格中所有要點(diǎn)。要求語句通順，意思連貫；2. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination The Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to 【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance ExaminationThe Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but als