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a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn),其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn),發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確,注意正確使用連詞,借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn):首先用一個(gè)自然段來闡明寫作的主題,表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)(認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次,開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn),陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例,相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí),think over the difficulties來回思考難點(diǎn),Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少,例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能,在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn),就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性,要豐富多彩,體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考,總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。6.書面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛的物品吧!請以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛的物品,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?,以及它存在的意義。要求:1. 請?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,短文連貫通順,80詞左右。A(n) _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A(n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析:這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述,要求是進(jìn)行描述,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的,在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài),在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性,避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。寫作亮點(diǎn):這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍,描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充,例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth(用黃布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過去分詞作定語,作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷,準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套,講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難,父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的,寫作是富有感情的,也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華,表達(dá)了作者的期望(I hope I can be a soldier),上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面,這樣的一篇作文是有深度的,能夠讓人感動(dòng)的,是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。7.為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個(gè)選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容提示:1. 楊時(shí)去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門口2. 通過介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。要求:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數(shù):100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱