【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（浙江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)，英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部就“是否愿意為別人投票選舉”這一話(huà)題展開(kāi)來(lái)討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not） willing to vote for others” 為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，向?？陡澹x擇你認(rèn)同的一種觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己的理由。Be willing to vote for othersBe not willing to vote for others投票方式有趣，方便，免費(fèi)可以用朋友圈（circle of friends）支持自己喜歡的人……投票方式不公平浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，無(wú)聊……注意：1. 根據(jù)你認(rèn)同的方式，將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相應(yīng)內(nèi)容，省略號(hào)內(nèi)容必須補(bǔ)充完整2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名，詞數(shù)：801003. 短文首句僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I _____ willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people havedifferent ideas. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I am willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.【解析】【詳解】本篇是一篇議論文，首先要要題目補(bǔ)充完整，說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊成還是反對(duì)。文章分為三步走：第一段擺出自己的觀點(diǎn)；接下來(lái)第二段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，即說(shuō)明自己的理由；最后一段對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確，在陳述自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很條理性和連貫性。最后In a word, I think….對(duì)自己觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行最后總結(jié)。非常好的一篇文章。9．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)86. 如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，壓力大。上周我班學(xué)生對(duì)如何減壓、放松進(jìn)行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話(huà)題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時(shí)間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（張家港市梁豐初級(jí)中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 假設(shè)你校英文社正在調(diào)查中學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)過(guò)程中會(huì)遇到的問(wèn)題。下面表格列舉了最普遍的三個(gè)問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這些問(wèn)題及給出的合理建議，為報(bào)社寫(xiě)一份英文報(bào)告。問(wèn)題建議閱讀技能差大聲朗讀新單詞記憶難…聽(tīng)不懂本土人講的話(huà)多聽(tīng)多看英文節(jié)目寫(xiě)作要求：1. 報(bào)告須包含表格中所有信息，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢、通順；2. 表格中省略號(hào)處請(qǐng)23句話(huà)作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,給出合理的建議；3. 詞數(shù)90左右，報(bào)告的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯： 本土人 （native speaker）Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays it’s important and necessary to learn English well but students are having problems learning English. Many students are poor at reading skills. Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills. Reading can make you feel confident. Some other students feel difficult to remember new words. The best way to learn new words is through listening. You can listen to English radio programs or TV programs. At the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers say. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Practice reading and listening as much as possible, and you can be a good learner.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如have problem doing，be poor at，make you feel confident，some other students，the best way，listen to，at the same time，help sb. do，as much as possible等。同時(shí)Reading English aloud is very important and necessary in improving reading skills./ The best way to learn new words is through the same time, listen to or watch such programs as you can, which can help you understand what the native speakers ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化。而三句As a…的運(yùn)用，使短文很有條理，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)間過(guò)得飛快，似乎幾個(gè)月前才進(jìn)入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請(qǐng)以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語(yǔ)速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒(méi)有足夠的時(shí)間來(lái)進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)；2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；3．你在這最后一個(gè)月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2．第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話(huà)作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；