【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 s．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the they are active in class.Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games.I think students should use iPad in teachers don’t allow students to play games in is good for students to use iPad in class.【解析】【詳解】根據(jù)題意近年來，越來越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。在提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量的同時(shí)也使得教育更加多樣化。但人們對此的看法褒貶不一。請根據(jù)以下表格，在英語課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。我們所要做的首先是?yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in ，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。8．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)為了解學(xué)生們的職業(yè)觀，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)表格中的結(jié)果，寫一篇英語調(diào)查報(bào)告，并且結(jié)合實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勀銓ξ磥砉ぷ鞯倪x擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱奈磥砉ぷ鬟x擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。s lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That39。s because I love children and I love English, too.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告。文章要按照題目要求，根據(jù)提綱中所給的信息完成短文，短文句中時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，句中的主要是第三人稱，句中使用了一些固定短語和句中結(jié)果，例如，would like to do sth. in the future。 be happy with。 hope to do sth. as well as。 think about。 in my opinion。此外文章使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。或使用祈使句、非謂語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時(shí)、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了時(shí)間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（全國中考模擬）書面表達(dá)健康的生活習(xí)慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。信息提示：。 , 不熬夜。 , 強(qiáng)身健體。，做網(wǎng)絡(luò)的主人。要求：根據(jù)信息提示, 把握要點(diǎn), 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不逐字翻譯。字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。I think healthy habits are very important for us. Best wishes.Yours,【答案】I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bed for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should be in control of puter games instead of being addicted to them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文。請根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。11．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)你看過中央電視臺董卿主持的節(jié)目《朗讀者》嗎？這是一檔非常受歡迎的節(jié)目，讓我們看到生活中讀書的美好、讀書的重要。請根據(jù)下面表格中所列的要點(diǎn)，以“Growing Up with Reading”為題寫一篇短文。要求：1．語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順；2．短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；文章開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縃ave you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy.Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a re