【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 rnational Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問(wèn)題就是寫(xiě)作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采取郵件格式，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。句型：not only…but also；You39。d better …；I39。m looking forward to…。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購(gòu)的英文書(shū)籍。俱樂(lè)部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書(shū)后的感受。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂(lè)部的活動(dòng)情況，并說(shuō)說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)的好處。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1表達(dá)收到圖書(shū)后的喜悅與感激之情。2介紹活動(dòng)的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂(lè)部成員們一起讀英文書(shū)。（2）本周五的下午3點(diǎn)，大家將共同交流讀書(shū)的體會(huì)。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購(gòu)其他的英文書(shū)。3說(shuō)一說(shuō)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)書(shū)有什么好處。寫(xiě)作要求：1不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4至少80詞。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂(lè)部中讀書(shū)交流會(huì)的活動(dòng)，并且告訴外教同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)并闡述網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)的好處。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。最近他對(duì)母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫(xiě)信想了解該詩(shī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________