【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 some even dislike talking with their friends face to face. I think they shouldn’t be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Or they have to turn off their mobile phones when they are in the school. And they should spend more time on some sports, because playing sports is good for their body and mind.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對許多學生課下熱衷于在手機上聊天這一現(xiàn)象談談你的看法和建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如love doing, it作形式主語，however, face to face, be allowed to do, spend時間+on sth以及be good for。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導“低碳生活（lowcarbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對我們大家都有好處，請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。提示詞語：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a ,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it39。s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we39。d better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達。職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國，指的是對職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計劃的過程。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學生，我們也是時候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。請以此為主題寫一篇短文。寫作要求:：80—120詞；。參考要點：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準備（學習、興趣發(fā)展等）；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構主要為系表結(jié)構和動賓結(jié)構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。【點睛】本文結(jié)構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當一名教師，接下來介紹我選擇當老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準備，最后表示只要我有機會，我將會選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。10．（四川成都外國語學校中考模擬） Writing. Thirtyyear old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:1. Some mon forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. （At least two examples）2. Some effects（影響） on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isprevalentin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. First, because students spend most of their time in school and it39。s the school39。s responsibility to protect them andstopany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for , as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學校的欺凌事件?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構主要為系表結(jié)構和動賓結(jié)構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我經(jīng)歷過的欺凌事件的形式，接下來介紹學校欺凌事件對學生的影響，最后介紹解決欺凌事件的方法。此處as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。11．（江蘇中考模擬）臨近畢業(yè)，學校在學習小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評和組評活動，假設你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長，請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價，寫一 份素質(zhì)報告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認為看書有很多好處（請列舉2個好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄铡Ｔ趯W校和同學相處融洽。上學途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學校授予了他優(yōu)秀學生獎（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實際情況提2點建議）…要求：表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點必須包括所有相關信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team ca