【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容介紹一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。主要是要完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容、結(jié)合自己的實際情況陳述個人觀點或給出建議。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱。在陳述個人觀點或給出建議時用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hat you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海邊看到的不是風(fēng)景，而是無數(shù)晃動的頭。句子What you see at the seaside做主語。【高分句型二】In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看來，旅行時，人們不僅要注意安全，還要注意衛(wèi)生，不要到處亂扔垃圾。該句話運(yùn)用了not only…but also…。9．（北京中考模擬）“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉， 行成于思而毀于隨” 。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶窃趺醋龅模约盀槭裁催@樣做。提示詞語： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題寫一篇英文稿件,主要談?wù)勛约旱暮玫膶W(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。在寫作時,要根據(jù)提出的幾個問題為中心圍繞展開，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难由臁?. 例文點評：文章采用三段式，以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點，語言層次感很強(qiáng)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。3. 高分亮點：短語：get ready for；take notes；on time；daily life；important points。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。10．（安徽省蚌埠龍湖中學(xué)中考模擬）當(dāng)前，我市各學(xué)校正在開展“好書伴我成長”活動。請你根據(jù)活動主題并結(jié)合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”為題，用英語寫一篇約80個單詞的倡議書，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書的益處獲取知識、開闊視野、使人快樂 存在的現(xiàn)象聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占用了大部分業(yè)余時間發(fā)出倡議多讀書，讀經(jīng)典好書。讓讀書成為我們生活的一部分。要求：；，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Growing up with Good booksMy dear friend,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Dear Friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will bee.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let’s start reading now. And let it bee a part of our life!Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the ，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)無錫被評為內(nèi)地最宜居城市。假設(shè)你班對此進(jìn)行了一次班級討論，請你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿，號召廣大學(xué)生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容提示如下：1．政府修建了很多新路、大橋，甚至還有地鐵；2．新添了很多露天開放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；3．私家車越來越多，停車已成了大問題；4．城市變化有利有弊；5．你的希望：……注意事項：1．發(fā)言稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2．第5個要點須用2至3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4．發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a piic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it39。s being difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal w