【文章內容簡介】 解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動，并且告訴外教同學們現(xiàn)在喜歡網購圖書并闡述網購圖書的好處。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導非限制性定語從句。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．（江蘇中考模擬）三年的初中生活即將結束，你一定對初中生活留下了很多美好的回憶。下周五你班要召開畢業(yè)班會，請根據(jù)下面的英文提示，并適當發(fā)揮，以“I remember ”為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，分享你校園生活中的一次活動或經歷。要點如下：1. What’s the event? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. How did you feel at that moment?4. How has the event changed your life? 注意：，并適當發(fā)揮。，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關信息。I remember How time flies! My junior school life is ing to an end. 【答案】I rememberHow time flies, my junior school life is ing to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale. When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children. It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如e to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，e to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而復雜并列結構It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。8．（山東中考模擬）為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求：1. 可以適當增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，具有條理性。9．（上海市澧溪中學初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）當昨日重現(xiàn)之時，在腦海里的都是回憶。記憶中有沒有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。請選取一個方面，結合自身經歷，談談你當時的經歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）The following is for reference only（以下表達僅供參考）used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應注意選取一個給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。結合自身經歷，談談你當時的經歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。：例文采用三段式：用第一人稱來敘述故事內容：時態(tài)采用一般過去式為主，敘述過去的經歷，敘述完整清晰。：短語：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。句型：such…that…；