【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．（江蘇中考模擬）假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時(shí)間曾向英語(yǔ)?？端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩(shī)。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈(zèng)言。為此，編輯部策劃開(kāi)“A Letter to My Teacher”專(zhuān)欄，邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形式重新投稿。短詩(shī)如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項(xiàng)：，不得抄寫(xiě)短詩(shī)原文：、意思連貫、符合情境。，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開(kāi)“A Letter to My Teacher”專(zhuān)欄，邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（廣東中考模擬）近年，有一些地區(qū)提出把游泳納入中考的體育考試，并在學(xué)生中做了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查。下面是一個(gè)學(xué)校的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查情況寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文闡明調(diào)查結(jié)果及表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占：57%不贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占：43%理由：1. 強(qiáng)身健體，預(yù)防疾病2. 訓(xùn)練求生技能3. 休閑娛樂(lè)，放松身心理由：1. 害怕水2. 有危險(xiǎn)性3. 氣溫低時(shí)容易感冒你的觀點(diǎn)與理由？要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）2. 不得透露學(xué)校，姓名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school. 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against （prevent） illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.（In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.）【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)所給材料，闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)，而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章分為三個(gè)部分，第一部分，首先引出本文話題，并用Here’s the result from one ， 引出調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…。注意闡明觀點(diǎn)列舉理由時(shí)，要注意條理性，比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then；或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等；本文內(nèi)容完整，寫(xiě)作條理清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。9．（浙江中考模擬） 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國(guó)家文明城市的號(hào)召，麗水市中小學(xué)開(kāi)展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……（至少2條）注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________