【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。7．（江西中考模擬）健康的體魄離不開好的生活習(xí)慣。同樣，對于學(xué)生來說優(yōu)異成績的取得也需要好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”為題寫一篇英語短文談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。提示?. 養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的好處；2. 學(xué)生中不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的表現(xiàn)；3. 對養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議（至少提三條建議）。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上提示要點(diǎn)可以，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 90詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to Develop Good Study Habits Every student wants to study well, but it′s not 【答案】How to Develop Good Study HabitsEvery student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you aren39。t feeling sleepy. Second, find a fortable place to study, but not too fortable or you may go to sleep! Third, you39。d better ask for help when having trouble studying.Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then you’ll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫出如何培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣?！驹斀狻靠忌鶕?jù)提示的3點(diǎn)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。在內(nèi)容方面，首先要寫出好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的好處，也就是為什么要培養(yǎng)好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；其次是在學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)現(xiàn)的不好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；最后提出自己對養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議；在語言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，簡潔無錯(cuò)；在規(guī)范方面，注意單詞拼寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)防護(hù)好的正確使用。8．（湖南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你校英語社團(tuán)即將舉辦為“My hobby” 的征文活動(dòng)， 請你根據(jù)下面的提示問題寫一篇短文介紹你的愛好，然后參加此活動(dòng)。提示問題：1. What’s your hobby?2. Why do you like it?3. When did you start it?4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?要求：1. 緊扣主題，語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語意要通順、連貫；2. 不少于80詞。My hobby 【答案】My? HobbyI have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it39。s always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.【解析】【詳解】本篇作文按照要求可分為4塊兒內(nèi)容，首先指出我的愛好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接著說明為什么喜歡這個(gè)愛好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years ，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one . 中間用到短語such as…,以及連詞because…., when….and…等，使文章表達(dá)清晰，也具有連貫性，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。9．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近日，你校迎來一批來自英國的交流生，學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。請你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文，向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。種類種類多樣，各具特色。習(xí)俗以茶會(huì)友，饋贈(zèng)親朋。功效有益健康，提神醒腦。影響……（自擬兩點(diǎn)）。注意:，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。中國有很多種茶。它們中的每一個(gè)都有自己的特點(diǎn)。大多數(shù)中國人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國人了解中國，而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。10．（天津中考模擬）近日中央電視臺(tái)報(bào)道了一個(gè)十四歲小男孩何思汗的事跡，介紹了他賣畫籌款醫(yī)治姑姑的感人故事。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文。（1）何思汗從小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼對繪畫有很大興趣。（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日漸貧寒。（3）他作畫籌款給姑姑治病。（4）思汗勇于面對困難、主動(dòng)承擔(dān)家務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)。（5）你的想法……參考詞匯：嚴(yán)重的serious 疾病disease要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Moving Story of He SihanRecently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He________________【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housework. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹何思汗的感人事跡。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比較級(jí)and比較級(jí), raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in