【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 nt opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫目前，許多中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班，對此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班贊同者的觀點。第三段要寫中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班反對者的觀點。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點?！驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮?？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語、句型：all kinds of ，Some others，As for me ，Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，可以分四段寫：總體簡單描述話題；贊成；反對；你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9．（河南中考模擬）書面表達。因?qū)W習壓力大，部分中學生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會的關注和教育部門的高度重視。假若你是來自九年級三班的李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。建議大家積極多參加體育活動，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名。要點：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請你談談對學校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（湖南省岳陽開發(fā)區(qū)長嶺中學中考模擬）時光荏苒，轉(zhuǎn)眼間你已經(jīng)成長為一名即將步入高中的青少年。在你十幾年的人生旅途中，一定充滿了各種各樣的歡樂。請你以“_______ makes me happy”為題并根據(jù)所給要點提示, 寫一篇英語短文給校英語廣播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快樂的事情及理由。 要點提示:1. 使你快樂的事情是什么；2. 它使你快樂的理由。要求: 1. 請補全標題, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。_______ makes me happy【答案】One possible version:Reading makes me happy During my spare time, I like reading best. It can always make me happy. Reading can bring many things to me, such as knowledge, ways of doing things, chances to know about different cultures and so on. Reading a good book is like talking with a wise person. When I feel lonely and when I meet troubles, I always find a book to read. When I am lost in the interesting stories, I won’t feel unhappy anymore. Reading brings me so much happiness that I’ll keep the habit of reading along my life journey.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“_______ makes me happy”為題，寫一篇英語短文給校英語廣播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使我快樂的事情及理由?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了讀書讓我感到快樂，接下來介紹讀書的好處，最后指出我會一生保持讀書的習慣。此處like doing sth, such as, know about, talk with, be lost in, bring sb sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是在蘇州學習的英國交流學生Max，你的英國同學Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學習和生活情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件內(nèi)容，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實際情況用英語給Simon回復一封電子郵件。To: maxbritain@From: simonbritain@Subject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes lik