【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 分享快樂(lè)和悲傷。他們不會(huì)再感到孤獨(dú)了。更重要的是，他們認(rèn)為他們會(huì)得到更多的自由。但其他人不同意。他們認(rèn)為他們不會(huì)適應(yīng)這種變化。他們也擔(dān)心他們的父母不會(huì)像以前那樣愛(ài)他們。另外，他們擔(dān)心新出生的孩子會(huì)吵得他們學(xué)習(xí)不方便。在我看來(lái)，很難說(shuō)有兄弟姐妹是好是壞。但我們應(yīng)該尊重父母的選擇。畢竟，他們是最終決定的人?！靖叻志湫汀?．Besides，they39。re afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．①that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．②so…that如此…以致于…，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．2．In my opinion，①it39。s hard to say ②whether it39。s good or bad to have a brother or sister．①it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．②say后面是whether 引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．3．①After all，they39。re the persons ②who will make the final decision．①after all 畢竟，做插入語(yǔ)．②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞presons，who作為從句的主語(yǔ)．【點(diǎn)睛】本文思路清晰，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級(jí)。書(shū)面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和高分句式，語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。8．（四川中考模擬） 書(shū)面表達(dá)本周你們班召開(kāi)了一次主題班會(huì)“畢業(yè)前，我能為學(xué)校做些什么？”大家踴躍發(fā)言，作為第三小組成員，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)各小組的情況匯報(bào)以及你們小組的討論情況，寫(xiě)一個(gè)總結(jié)交給老師。第一小組把我們用過(guò)的書(shū)本和學(xué)習(xí)用品贈(zèng)送給七年級(jí)、八年級(jí)的弟弟妹妹， 尤其是家庭貧困的同學(xué)。第二小組籌錢(qián)，為學(xué)校圖書(shū)館購(gòu)買(mǎi)書(shū)籍。第三小組......提示詞： 贈(zèng)送 present 用過(guò)的 used注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞；2. 補(bǔ)充好本小組討論情況；3. 要點(diǎn)完整，層次清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地名、校名等。What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.【答案】What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片書(shū)面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)出一個(gè)班會(huì)會(huì)后的總結(jié)?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇材料作文。表格中一個(gè)兩個(gè)組的討論結(jié)果，第三組是需要考生圍繞著主題自己補(bǔ)充的，盡量避免與前面兩組重復(fù)。我們可以按照總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)寫(xiě)。 首先引出此次班會(huì)的主題；其次分別寫(xiě)出三個(gè)小組的討論結(jié)果；最后可以對(duì)三個(gè)小組進(jìn)行總結(jié)，表達(dá)情感。在語(yǔ)言上要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。9．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，作為活動(dòng)主持人，你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Smith 先生來(lái)參加本周末學(xué)校開(kāi)展的“英語(yǔ)戲劇展示”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)函，告訴他本次活動(dòng)的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，安排了哪些內(nèi)容，以及需要他做哪些事情。提示詞語(yǔ):wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。m glad to tell you there39。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請(qǐng)外教史密斯先生參加英語(yǔ)戲劇展示活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（內(nèi)蒙古中考模擬） 書(shū)面表達(dá)國(guó)家提出一對(duì)夫婦可生育兩個(gè)孩子的政策后,全社會(huì)展開(kāi)了熱議。某校也就“是否想要個(gè)弟弟或妹妹”對(duì)部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫(xiě)一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。問(wèn)卷調(diào)查結(jié)果如下:觀點(diǎn)支持反對(duì)人數(shù)比例40%60%原因。,分享快樂(lè),分擔(dān)憂(yōu)愁。3.……。3.……要求:。,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整,句式規(guī)范。、地名。文章開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總數(shù)。Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.【答案】Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or opinions are different.Here are the results. About forty percent students think it39。s good to have a brother or a sister. They can help each other and share happiness and sadness together. And they won39。t feel lonely anymore. What39。s more,they think they39。ll get freedom.But others disagree. They think they won39。t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won39。t love them as much as before. Besides,they39。re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study.In my opinion,it39。s hard to say whether it39。s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents39。 choices. After all,they39。re the persons who will make the final decision.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫(xiě)一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符