【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 d提示問(wèn)題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過(guò)勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無(wú)涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來(lái)需要靠不斷努力來(lái)創(chuàng)造。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績(jī)？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺(jué)得怎么樣？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因?yàn)槲覍?duì)自己的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)沒(méi)有那么自信，在公共場(chǎng)合說(shuō)話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?！靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習(xí)得越多，就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)”結(jié)構(gòu)。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。10．（四川成都外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬） Writing. Thirtyyear old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:1. Some mon forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. （At least two examples）2. Some effects（影響） on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isprevalentin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. First, because students spend most of their time in school and it39。s the school39。s responsibility to protect them andstopany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for , as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)校的欺凌事件?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我經(jīng)歷過(guò)的欺凌事件的形式，接下來(lái)介紹學(xué)校欺凌事件對(duì)學(xué)生的影響，最后介紹解決欺凌事件的方法。此處as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。11．（西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛(ài)，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里得事情幫著做； 學(xué)校的事情搶著做，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力。要求；，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范2. 字?jǐn)?shù)70 字左右（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)） As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeus independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let39。s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：it39。s very important for us to……, It’s our job to……, We can….., We should……, We sometimes need to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了作為中學(xué)生，獨(dú)立很重要，接下來(lái)介紹我們應(yīng)如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力，最后指出不要總是依靠其他人。此處begin with, make one’s bed, help with, look after, on time, need to do sth, depend on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。12．（廣東中考模擬）近來(lái)，野生動(dòng)物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應(yīng)該如何避免受到野生動(dòng)物的傷害呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文。提示：1. 遵守動(dòng)物園的各項(xiàng)規(guī)定；2. 參觀時(shí)不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)；3. 時(shí)刻提醒自己安全第一；4. 遇到危險(xiǎn)及時(shí)求助。要求：（開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. Secondly, we had better go anywhere with our parents or friends in the zoo. Thirdly, we should remember that safety es first all the time. We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous thi