【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓π@欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近日，你校迎來一批來自英國的交流生，學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。請你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文，向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。種類種類多樣，各具特色。習(xí)俗以茶會友，饋贈親朋。功效有益健康，提神醒腦。影響……（自擬兩點(diǎn)）。注意:，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。中國有很多種茶。它們中的每一個都有自己的特點(diǎn)。大多數(shù)中國人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國人了解中國，而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。10．（天津中考模擬）你馬上就要初中畢業(yè)了，恩師難忘，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，向大家介紹你的一位老師（Ms Wang）。（1） Ms Wang的基本情況：學(xué)科、年齡、外貌；（以上內(nèi)容自擬）（2） 老師的特點(diǎn)：嚴(yán)格，與學(xué)生相處融洽，和善，耐心，有創(chuàng)造性；（3） 你對老師的評價。參考詞匯：對某人嚴(yán)格的 be strict with sb. 創(chuàng)造性的 be creative要求：（1） 詞數(shù)：80?100個。（2） 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3） 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my ________ teacher, Ms Wang with you.【答案】I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生介紹自己最喜歡的老師。【詳解】這篇寫作考查考生對人物的描寫。對人物的描寫主要從基本信息、外貌、性格特征以及對其評價四個方面入手?？忌Y(jié)合著四個方面及所給信息，要做到信息全面，行文連貫。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子，并注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫腿ケ磉_(dá)，變化單詞的正確形式。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)。同時注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫11．（江蘇中考模擬）假定你是David，來自美國，你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實(shí)際用英語回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: davidwoodlandschool@From: limingsunshineschool@Subject: VolunteeringDear David， I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：?；貜?fù)信的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________