【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 中訴說(shuō)了她的煩惱，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)Lucy的來(lái)信，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封90詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理,信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同時(shí)For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)以寫(xiě)一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過(guò)得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過(guò)的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開(kāi)放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過(guò)的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。短文應(yīng)由開(kāi)頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開(kāi)頭引出話(huà)題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過(guò)程；最后一部分簡(jiǎn)要描寫(xiě)一下自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見(jiàn)、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕洹⒎侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過(guò)的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫(xiě)了自己做飯給媽媽?xiě)c祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話(huà)引出話(huà)題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)了事情的過(guò)程；最后一段寫(xiě)了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱(chēng)敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（浙江中考模擬）你養(yǎng)我長(zhǎng)大，我陪你變老。父母親一直在為我們的成長(zhǎng)默默付出，成長(zhǎng)要學(xué)會(huì)愛(ài)，感受愛(ài)。假設(shè)今天是你爸爸的生日，是你向爸爸表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)：1）給我生命，一直照顧我成長(zhǎng)；教我學(xué)會(huì)……2）努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件；3）今天，我要為您……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：1）參考所給內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和地名等信息。4）詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me in a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day.You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in your life，take care of, all the time，have problems with，in order to，work hard，from morning to evening，be ready to，in need，in the past，get better results等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In the past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me./ I hope you will be happy and healthy ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)生活中總有一些事情讓人覺(jué)得無(wú)奈，被人誤解、考試失利、遭遇逆境等。請(qǐng)以“There is always hope ”為題，寫(xiě)一篇你的親身經(jīng)歷及感受。 What’s your feeling? What did you learn from it?提示：①詞數(shù)不少于70詞 ②可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)使行文更加流暢 ③文中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)的姓名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】There is always hopeAs middle school students, we have all taken many examinations and experienced failure as well as success. Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams.Some of us bee low in spirits in the face of failure. Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies. As a res