【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來(lái)組織語(yǔ)言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時(shí)態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子，利用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。8．（靖江市靖城中學(xué)中考模擬）九年寒窗苦，六月備考忙。對(duì)于即將到來(lái)的中考，同學(xué)們既有期盼也有壓力。為了讓同學(xué)們學(xué)得開(kāi)心，學(xué)有信心，我校英文報(bào)刊將開(kāi)展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下表：現(xiàn)狀概述由于課業(yè)繁重，學(xué)生壓力較大。更注重學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言能力，學(xué)生難得高分，因此有些學(xué)生可能灰心。同學(xué)建議我們不僅要勤奮努力，更要改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法。應(yīng)該認(rèn)真計(jì)劃好時(shí)間，以便在學(xué)業(yè)和愛(ài)好間取得平衡。你的建議……（12點(diǎn)，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意事項(xiàng)：1. 征文須包含表格中所有要點(diǎn)。要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；2. 詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination The Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to 【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance ExaminationThe Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”為題，用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要描述如何面對(duì)中考，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for students to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我們面對(duì)中考會(huì)感到擔(dān)心，接下來(lái)介紹學(xué)生的現(xiàn)狀以及同學(xué)們給出的建議，最后表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)。此處from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（湖北中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所，以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響，請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見(jiàn)整理成一篇書(shū)面材料，報(bào)告給學(xué)校。 同意 ：1．多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨(dú)生子女，不會(huì)做事。 2．學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做艱苦的工作。 3．學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學(xué)生生病。 2．不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。 3．打掃教室就足夠了。 注意：1．短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類(lèi)的作文，那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話(huà)題，然后分別寫(xiě)出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)：argument爭(zhēng)論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì)；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮點(diǎn)句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來(lái)，在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論?，F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)（have/has+done）。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，疑問(wèn)詞+to do。10．（河北育華中學(xué)中考模擬）每個(gè)人在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，都會(huì)遇到很所不同的困惑，但為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想我們應(yīng)該克服困難，解決問(wèn)題?，F(xiàn)階段，你有什么困惑嗎？請(qǐng)以My Troubles at Present為主題，并根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：（1）What are your troubles at present? （2）What will you do to solve these troubles?要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。 （3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。My troubles at presentDuring the process of my growth, I have met different 【答案】My troubles at presentDuring the process of my growth, I have met different am a teenager and I have a problem just like any other teenager too. I think my problem is relating to what would I do if I grow up?. This is something I really have no answer for am worried about how I do at school. I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don39。t there anyone who can help me? I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)以My Troubles at Present為主題，并根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：短文先列出自己的煩惱是什么，之后再寫(xiě)如何解決這些煩惱。詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，為文章增色添彩。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：relate to；grow up；be worried about；w