【文章內容簡介】 to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應該怎么做。因此文章應主要分成三段，一個內容一段。文章內容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復合句；語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結構清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習慣。句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復合句，長短句結合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。8．（靖江市靖城中學中考模擬）九年寒窗苦，六月備考忙。對于即將到來的中考，同學們既有期盼也有壓力。為了讓同學們學得開心，學有信心，我校英文報刊將開展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比賽，請你根據(jù)提示內容，用英語簡要描述并適當表達自己的觀點。內容要點如下表：現(xiàn)狀概述由于課業(yè)繁重，學生壓力較大。更注重學生的語言能力，學生難得高分，因此有些學生可能灰心。同學建議我們不僅要勤奮努力，更要改進學習方法。應該認真計劃好時間，以便在學業(yè)和愛好間取得平衡。你的建議……（12點，做適當發(fā)揮）注意事項：1. 征文須包含表格中所有要點。要求語句通順，意思連貫；2. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination The Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to 【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance ExaminationThe Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”為題，用英語簡要描述如何面對中考，并適當表達自己的觀點?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for students to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們面對中考會感到擔心，接下來介紹學生的現(xiàn)狀以及同學們給出的建議，最后表達我的觀點。此處from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達 我校決定讓學生輪流打掃廁所，以此作為教育學生的一種方式。 這件事在學生中引 起了強烈的反響，請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報告給學校。 同意 ：1．多數(shù)學生是獨生子女，不會做事。 2．學生應該學會做艱苦的工作。 3．學會理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學生生病。 2．不是學生應該做的事情。 3．打掃教室就足夠了。 注意：1．短文應包括表中所有內容，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點明討論的話題，然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。重點詞匯及短語：argument爭論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對某人來說是個好機會；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮點句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學校讓學生做自愿勞動以來，在學生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論。現(xiàn)在完成時（have/has+done）。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務勞動是他們學習如何做困難工作的好機會。動詞不定式作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)，疑問詞+to do。10．（河北育華中學中考模擬）每個人在成長過程中，都會遇到很所不同的困惑，但為實現(xiàn)夢想我們應該克服困難，解決問題?，F(xiàn)階段，你有什么困惑嗎？請以My Troubles at Present為主題，并根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語寫一篇短文。提示：（1）What are your troubles at present? （2）What will you do to solve these troubles?要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。 （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。 （3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。My troubles at presentDuring the process of my growth, I have met different 【答案】My troubles at presentDuring the process of my growth, I have met different am a teenager and I have a problem just like any other teenager too. I think my problem is relating to what would I do if I grow up?. This is something I really have no answer for am worried about how I do at school. I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don39。t there anyone who can help me? I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)提示的內容，請以My Troubles at Present為主題，并根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語寫一篇短文。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。例文點評：短文先列出自己的煩惱是什么，之后再寫如何解決這些煩惱。詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，為文章增色添彩。高分亮點：短語：relate to；grow up；be worried about；w