【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 tch on Tony39。s study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony39。s study and makes him respond strongly. From a child39。s point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don39。t think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children39。s learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文，根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下父母為了關(guān)心孩子的學(xué)習(xí)，想隨時(shí)監(jiān)控孩子的學(xué)習(xí)狀況，就這樣對(duì)嗎？仔細(xì)分析所提供的圖片內(nèi)容，主要從你的看法和建議這個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hen children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時(shí)，他們將來(lái)怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢？句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫投縄t will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會(huì)影響未來(lái)的自信心建設(shè)，也會(huì)導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童，形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。7．（重慶一中中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)?！伴_(kāi)心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我們獨(dú)自旅行；煩惱的是父母不予支持。我們，可以獨(dú)自出游么？”這是本月我校英語(yǔ)“煩惱墻”上最令人關(guān)注的內(nèi)容，并引發(fā)了大家的熱烈討論。同為青少年的你覺(jué)得在沒(méi)有父母的陪伴下出游可行嗎？請(qǐng)你按要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文。參考要點(diǎn)：1. 解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容； 2. 陳述你的觀點(diǎn)及理由；3. 提出合理的相關(guān)建議。要求：1. 詞數(shù)80120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校名稱。Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文一般分為三部分：第一部分：闡明論點(diǎn)。解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容并陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)——青少年應(yīng)該被允許獨(dú)自旅行。第二部分：主體部分。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關(guān)建議。第三部分：再次重申論點(diǎn)。8．（黑龍江中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是Jack，中學(xué)英文報(bào) WARM HEART專(zhuān)欄的編輯，近期你收到一封署名為 Asking的求助信，該同學(xué)在信中訴說(shuō)了自己當(dāng)前焦慮的情緒，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，給他寫(xiě)一封回信。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 表達(dá)你對(duì)他的理解并給予安慰。2. 求助人焦慮情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。（1）下周將要進(jìn)行期末考試。（2）盡管準(zhǔn)備了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，對(duì)成績(jī)?nèi)詻](méi)有把握。3. 為他如何消除考前焦慮提出具體建議并說(shuō)明理由。寫(xiě)作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Hi, Asking,I’m the editor of WARM HEART. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對(duì)某位同學(xué)考前焦慮進(jìn)行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語(yǔ)放句首，用半倒裝。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)校園安全問(wèn)題越來(lái)越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。School safety_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________