【文章內容簡介】 行了介紹，并結合自己的經歷，講述了如何與父母相處。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細，內容也很充實，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點明了良好親子關系的重要性。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，語句通順。句式結構完整，以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復雜句式和結構。行文連貫、自然，表達流暢。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。7．（重慶一中中考模擬）書面表達?！伴_心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我們獨自旅行；煩惱的是父母不予支持。我們，可以獨自出游么？”這是本月我校英語“煩惱墻”上最令人關注的內容，并引發(fā)了大家的熱烈討論。同為青少年的你覺得在沒有父母的陪伴下出游可行嗎？請你按要求寫一篇英語作文。參考要點：1. 解讀“煩惱墻”內容； 2. 陳述你的觀點及理由；3. 提出合理的相關建議。要求：1. 詞數(shù)80120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和所在學校名稱。Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三部分：第一部分：闡明論點。解讀“煩惱墻”內容并陳述自己的觀點——青少年應該被允許獨自旅行。第二部分：主體部分。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關建議。第三部分：再次重申論點。8．（云南中考模擬）書面表達提示：轉眼間三年的初中生活即將結束，在這三年的學習與生活中一定有些讓你難忘的人或事物。請以“ An Unforgettable …”為題，寫一篇英語作文，記敘你難忘的人或事物以及你的感受。要求：1. 請先將題目補充完整后再作答；2. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；3. 文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；4. 將短文寫在答題卡上。寫在本試題卷上無效。【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。根據(jù)以“ An Unforgettable …”為題，寫一篇英語作文，記敘你難忘的人或事物以及你的感受。文章時態(tài)用一般過去式時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。【點睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。9．（北京中考模擬）“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經歷, 并談談你的感受?提示詞語: diligence （勤奮）, make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信，在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in 。【高分句型二】The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習得越多，就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級，the+比較級”結構。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。10．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報“英語角”欄目向同學們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。假定你是李明，請根據(jù)要點寫一封信，說說你的計劃。要求：；緊扣主題，適當發(fā)揮；，意思連貫，書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和地名；4. 詞數(shù)不少于70詞。（開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear editor，I39。m very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party．It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n．I have planned three activities for it．First of a11，we would like to invite our teachers to e．We will give each other