【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 iness is always around you 幸福總在你身邊；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學考試成績很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見家長；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難?？傮w來說這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務。8．（黑龍江中考模擬）書面表達假如你是九年級學生李華，你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給Billy回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。寫作要點：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試（physical test）做準備。2. 介紹你平時鍛煉的情況：（1）每天鍛煉的時間：不到一個半小時。（2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒時間。（3）擅長的體育運動：球類運動。3. 談談鍛煉給你帶來了哪些好處。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清晰。4. 至少80詞。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信，接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（河北育華中學中考模擬）你有沒有因為沒能好好管理時間而影響了學習的經(jīng)歷?請你寫一篇文章談談這件事及你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：（事情，原因及后果）；。作文要求：，可適當發(fā)揮。、校名和地名。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Once, I couldn39。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my 【答案】Once, I couldn39。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非謂語動詞結構Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。10．（四川中考模擬） 書面表達在你的成長過程中,許多人、許多事物一直在陪伴著你、支持著你、溫暖著你,讓你感動、伴你成長。請以“Say thanks to________”為題,寫一篇短文。要求: 1. 寫出要感謝的對象、原因及感激語言；,語意通順、連貫。,書寫工整、規(guī)范。、校名和地名。Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Say thanks to my teachersHow time flies! My junior high school lives will e to end.In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to fort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】 話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。11．（山東中考模擬） 書面表達 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80詞左右）時間來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。旅游曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。喜好過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。工作情況早晨8點起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時間練習漢語。夢想去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文使用的時態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去式和現(xiàn)在完成時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in . 曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of . 過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍