【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ou achieve?—What did you learn from the experience? 【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.【解析】【分析】本篇短文關(guān)于“付出與收獲”，學(xué)生可以通過(guò)自己的日常經(jīng)歷，來(lái)寫(xiě)付出了什么，中間是怎么努力的，以及最后從這段經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了什么?！驹斀狻勘疚膶?xiě)了自己一開(kāi)始不擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)，在自己的努力下，英語(yǔ)成績(jī)?nèi)〉昧诉M(jìn)步，每天聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)，閱讀英語(yǔ)，也嘗試著看一些英文電影，經(jīng)過(guò)幾個(gè)月的努力，英語(yǔ)成績(jī)有所提升。通過(guò)這件事意識(shí)到，只要肯努力，沒(méi)有什么是做不成的?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文參加此次活動(dòng)。（1）父母規(guī)矩太多，不允許晚上出去，過(guò)于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)，不理解自己。（2）你應(yīng)該理解父母，他們是愛(ài)孩子的，希望孩子前程似錦。（3）你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法：努力學(xué)習(xí)，聽(tīng)父母話。（4）……（至少一條）。要求：（1）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名。（3）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（4）短文的開(kāi)頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me... 【答案】How to keep a good relationship with parents　　In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.　　However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.　　In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.【解析】【詳解】某英文報(bào)社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開(kāi)展題為“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文參加此次活動(dòng)。注意文中用第一人稱(chēng)書(shū)寫(xiě)；；，可稍加評(píng)論；，發(fā)表你對(duì)壓力的看法；。意思連貫；【點(diǎn)睛】本文語(yǔ)句通順，段落分明。文中用到了一些好的句型：However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,這里給文章增色不少。10．（山東中考模擬）寫(xiě)作現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活（lowcarbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開(kāi)支的生活方式。低碳生活對(duì)我們大家都有好處，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文向一家英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a ,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it39。s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we39。d better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對(duì)“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（四川成都外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）Our junior school life is going to be finished very soon. Looking back, we must have our special thanks to someone, or something we feel regretful, or some moments which are unforgettable. Please use “The last moment of junior life “as the title to write an article which should be about 120 words. The following aspects should be mentioned:1. Your general feeling of your junior school life.2. Your special thanks to someone and describe the reasons. （at least two reasons）3. Describe the most unforgettable thing in your junior school in detail. （when, where, who, what happened）4. Show your best wishes to your teachers and classmates for the future.【答案】The last moment of junior lifeJunior school life is going to be finished soon. I feel very excited at this moment because I have made a lot of close friends in the past three years. Now I am ready to embrace the ing exam and the future senior high school life.I want to express my gratitude to my teachers. They taught me large amount of knowledge and they cheered me up several times in the past. They let me bee more confident.I was once a shy girl. I was afraid to speak in public. One day，my mother heard that a speech petition would be held in my school. She encouraged me to take part in the activity. At first, I was shocked by her advice, but I did not want to let her down, so I agreed. During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice. I still remembered that day clearly. When I won the first prize, my mother smiled happily.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文的題干大意是：我們的初中生活即將結(jié)束?；仡欉^(guò)去，我們一定想特別感謝某人，或者有些我們感到特別遺憾的事情，或者是一些令人難忘的時(shí)刻。請(qǐng)以“初中生活的最后一刻”作為寫(xiě)一篇應(yīng)該約120字的文章。需要包括的要點(diǎn)有：；，至少要寫(xiě)兩條原因；，要有細(xì)節(jié)，說(shuō)出時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候可以分為三個(gè)部分，第一段介紹自己的感受，第二段講對(duì)某人的感謝及其原因，最后一段寫(xiě)一個(gè)小片段，寫(xiě)寫(xiě)自己想感謝的人。這里可以寫(xiě)感謝自己的母親在初中鼓勵(lì)我參加演講比賽。用到的短語(yǔ)可以有：speak in public 在公共場(chǎng)合