【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ou achieve?—What did you learn from the experience? 【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.【解析】【分析】本篇短文關(guān)于“付出與收獲”，學(xué)生可以通過自己的日常經(jīng)歷，來寫付出了什么，中間是怎么努力的，以及最后從這段經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了什么。【詳解】本文寫了自己一開始不擅長英語，在自己的努力下，英語成績?nèi)〉昧诉M(jìn)步，每天聽英語，閱讀英語，也嘗試著看一些英文電影，經(jīng)過幾個月的努力，英語成績有所提升。通過這件事意識到，只要肯努力，沒有什么是做不成的?！军c睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。（1）父母規(guī)矩太多，不允許晚上出去，過于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績，不理解自己。（2）你應(yīng)該理解父母，他們是愛孩子的，希望孩子前程似錦。（3）你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法：努力學(xué)習(xí)，聽父母話。（4）……（至少一條）。要求：（1）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與校名。（3）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（4）短文的開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me... 【答案】How to keep a good relationship with parents　　In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.　　However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.　　In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.【解析】【詳解】某英文報社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。注意文中用第一人稱書寫；；，可稍加評論；，發(fā)表你對壓力的看法；。意思連貫；【點睛】本文語句通順，段落分明。文中用到了一些好的句型：However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,這里給文章增色不少。10．（山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活（lowcarbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對我們大家都有好處，請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。提示詞語：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a ,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it39。s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we39。d better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Our junior school life is going to be finished very soon. Looking back, we must have our special thanks to someone, or something we feel regretful, or some moments which are unforgettable. Please use “The last moment of junior life “as the title to write an article which should be about 120 words. The following aspects should be mentioned:1. Your general feeling of your junior school life.2. Your special thanks to someone and describe the reasons. （at least two reasons）3. Describe the most unforgettable thing in your junior school in detail. （when, where, who, what happened）4. Show your best wishes to your teachers and classmates for the future.【答案】The last moment of junior lifeJunior school life is going to be finished soon. I feel very excited at this moment because I have made a lot of close friends in the past three years. Now I am ready to embrace the ing exam and the future senior high school life.I want to express my gratitude to my teachers. They taught me large amount of knowledge and they cheered me up several times in the past. They let me bee more confident.I was once a shy girl. I was afraid to speak in public. One day，my mother heard that a speech petition would be held in my school. She encouraged me to take part in the activity. At first, I was shocked by her advice, but I did not want to let her down, so I agreed. During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice. I still remembered that day clearly. When I won the first prize, my mother smiled happily.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文的題干大意是：我們的初中生活即將結(jié)束?；仡欉^去，我們一定想特別感謝某人，或者有些我們感到特別遺憾的事情，或者是一些令人難忘的時刻。請以“初中生活的最后一刻”作為寫一篇應(yīng)該約120字的文章。需要包括的要點有：；，至少要寫兩條原因；，要有細(xì)節(jié)，說出時間、地點、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件。寫作的時候可以分為三個部分，第一段介紹自己的感受，第二段講對某人的感謝及其原因，最后一段寫一個小片段，寫寫自己想感謝的人。這里可以寫感謝自己的母親在初中鼓勵我參加演講比賽。用到的短語可以有：speak in public 在公共場合