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假期學習和生活計劃。假如你是李華,請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語向同學們匯報一下你的計劃。內(nèi)容提示:暑假計劃學習博覽群書;學習技能 (或自擬一點)生活健康飲食;堅持鍛煉 (或自擬一點)其它熱愛公益;親近自然 (或自擬一點)注意:1. 表達中必須包括所給要點,可以適當發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That’s all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如I39。d like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,join in,be kind to someone in need,pay more attention to,be close to nature,search the Internet等。而First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ,既使短文層次清晰,又豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。6.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華,請你為??⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談談自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧L崾驹~語:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing提示問題:Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates