【文章內容簡介】 所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。8．（河北中考模擬）請以“Never Give Up”為題,寫一篇短文,簡要描述圖中的三個畫面,并談談自己的想法?要求:1. 文中不得涉及真實的人名,校名和地名?2. 可以適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順?3. 詞數(shù):80個詞左右,已給出的部分不計入總詞數(shù)?提示詞:the long distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practiceNever Give UpThe . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Never Give Up The . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do longdistance running. After school they run on the playground together. They pete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result. Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the . exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，題目中有三張圖片，展示了九年級的學生們在為體育測試做準備，我們應根據(jù)圖片，以Never give up為題，寫一篇文章，簡要描述三個畫面，并談一談自己的想法。寫作之前，應仔細觀察圖片，看清楚圖片展示的內容，三張圖片展示了三個體育項目，跑步、鉛球和跳遠，寫作時，應使用形象、直觀的語言，詳細介紹圖片中的內容，然后組織語言，串聯(lián)成文。文章可以分兩段，第一段介紹圖片內容，第二段談論自己的想法。題目中有詞匯的提示，寫作時應注意使用。通過分析可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達的需要確定應使用的時態(tài)。注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能寫漢語式的英語，而應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y構為主，穿插使用并列句和復合句，調整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文的描述符合圖片中的內容，敘述非常詳細，并對圖片展開了合理的想象，使文章的內容更加豐富。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題。其次短文中句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣，語法規(guī)范，語言得體。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式。句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句等復合句，提升了文章檔次和水平，整篇文章表達流暢。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。9．（湖南中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李華，馬上將要中學畢業(yè)，一路上肯定有很多人幫助或者鼓勵過你。某英文雜志社正向九年級畢業(yè)生征文，請用英語寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文，將你對你的父母、老師、朋友或同學的感謝表達出來。要求：（1）將標題補充完整，80詞左右；（2） 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3） 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學校名和地名。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“Thank you, My teacher ”為題，寫一篇短文，感謝我的老師。【詳解】結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I39。d like to……，When she found……，She was always patient to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。【點睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要感謝我的老師王小姐，接下來介紹她對我的幫助，最后表示從老師那里得到的愛和支持將永遠和我在一起。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。10．（山東中考模擬）書面表達。根據(jù)下列圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文，要求敘述完整。 1 2 34 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 . We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們在一次爬山過程中保護環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們決定去爬山，接下來介紹我們在山頂上發(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾，然后撿拾垃圾，最后表達我們的感受。此處set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。11．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學校英語廣播站正在招募主持人。請你用英文給負責的老師 Sam 寫一封自薦信，內容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具體打算做的事情。提示詞語： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語廣播站）. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________