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a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:這是一個(gè)提綱作文。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時(shí),會(huì)用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。另外在寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯?!军c(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時(shí)也可以包括日?;顒?dòng)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。在介紹長(zhǎng)相時(shí)用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。當(dāng)主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。7.(江蘇中考模擬)目前,許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班,對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。 贊成者的觀點(diǎn)1. 能夠?qū)W得更好,考試考得更好,上更好的高中;2. 避免花太多時(shí)間看電視、玩游戲。反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)1. 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息;2. 壓力過大不利于身體健康。你的觀點(diǎn)1. 課堂上好好學(xué)就足夠了,補(bǔ)課不必要;2. 課后可以自己......注意:1. 表達(dá)清楚,語法通順,上下文連貫;2. 必須包括提示的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn);3. 詞數(shù):100詞左右(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));4. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫目前,許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班,對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班贊同者的觀點(diǎn)。第三段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?!驹斀狻?,看看有哪些要求?哪些時(shí)態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色,人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用短語、句型:all kinds of ,Some others,As for me ,Some people think that They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分四段寫:總體簡(jiǎn)單描述話題;贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。8.(廣東中考模擬)近年,有一些地區(qū)提出把游泳納入中考的體育考試,并在學(xué)生中做了一次問卷調(diào)查。下面是一個(gè)學(xué)校的調(diào)查結(jié)果,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查情況寫一篇英語短文闡明調(diào)查結(jié)果及表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占:57%不贊成的學(xué)生人數(shù)占:43%理由:1. 強(qiáng)身健體,預(yù)防疾病2. 訓(xùn)練求生技能3. 休閑娛樂,放松身心理由:1. 害怕水2. 有危險(xiǎn)性3. 氣溫低時(shí)容易感冒你的觀點(diǎn)與理由?要求:1. 詞數(shù)80左右。(文章的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù))2. 不得透露學(xué)校,姓名等個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分。In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools, Here’s the result from one school. 【答案】例文In recently years, some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education. And they made a survey about it in some schools. Here’s the result from one school.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because it can help build up our body and guide against (prevent) illness. Besides, swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters. It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons. First, some of them are afraid of getting in the water. Second, it may be dangerous because we may drown. Then, when it is cold, we may catch a cold.In my opinion, it’s a good idea lo have swimming lessons. I can improve my health, and relax myself after classes as well.(In my opinion, it’s not a good way to have swimming lessons at school. Because it’s expensive to build a swimming pool, and sometimes it’s difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)所給材料,闡明關(guān)于“把游泳納入中考體育考試”的兩種不同觀點(diǎn),而且最后還要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn),所以文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章分為三個(gè)部分,第一部分,首先引出本文話題,并用Here’s the result from one , 引出調(diào)查結(jié)果;第二部分分別闡述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school. Because….。 However, 43 percent students are against this plan for some my opinion…。注意闡明觀點(diǎn)列舉理由時(shí),要注意條理性,比如用到表示次序先后的詞first, second, then;或者句型It can…… It also can…..,besides…..等;本文內(nèi)容完整,寫作條理清晰,語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。9.(中央民族大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)昆明五華實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校中考模擬)A good book is important to me要求:1. 緊扣主題,意思連貫,語言通順,書寫規(guī)范。2. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名,如需使用名字,請(qǐng)用Mike, Gina等英文名字。 校名統(tǒng)一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60?!敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can le