【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難，最后取得成功的；最后說一下你自己的感受。寫作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來。其次要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為主，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，寫了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，層次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式形式，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。5．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫一篇100詞左右的文章（文章開頭已給出）。學(xué)會(huì)對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）。使你自信，擊敗你的人有時(shí)就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會(huì)對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離。參考詞匯： 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is