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y,I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. I have to go to see my friend in the hospital that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Sunday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Lin Lei【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息向Mary解釋一下你不能赴約的原因。主要從表示歉意;說明原因;另約時間這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縄’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. 很抱歉,我星期六早上不能和你一起去歷史博物館了。句子that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday 。【高分句型二】If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話,我們8:30在校門外見面。If it’s convenient for you是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。9.(中央民族大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)昆明五華實驗學(xué)校中考模擬)A good book is important to me要求:1. 緊扣主題,意思連貫,語言通順,書寫規(guī)范。2. 不得使用真實姓名和校名,如需使用名字,請用Mike, Gina等英文名字。 校名統(tǒng)一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60?!敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.【解析】【分析】本題是命題作文,根據(jù)題目一本好書對我是重要的,自己寫相關(guān)內(nèi)容,可以是你讀了什么書,該書對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。也可以是一本好書為什么對你來說是重要的?!驹斀狻勘酒恼轮饕獜臑槭裁磳ξ抑匾@個角度來寫。文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。題目并沒有給過多的提示信息,所以需要學(xué)生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。在寫作時,注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。【點睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10.(黑龍江中考模擬)書籍是人類進(jìn)步的階梯,是屹立在知識海洋里的燈塔。英國著名作家培根曾經(jīng)說過:“閱讀使人充實?!笨梢婇喿x在每個人的成長過程中都起著至關(guān)重要的作用。請以“Reading Is Important for Us”為題, 用英語寫一篇短文。要點如下:1. 讀書的重要原因;2. 你在生活中是如何閱讀的注意:1. 詞數(shù)在80~100詞之間;2. 字跡工整,語法正確,意思連貫,合乎邏輯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 【答案】Reading Is Important for UsThere is a famous saying, “Reading makes full man.”Reading is very important in our life. It can not only improve our happiness of life but also increase our knowledge. It is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language.When I was young, I was interested in reading. So I have been good at writing since my childhood. How to read books? We can do something that follows.First, we should develop the habit of reading. Second, we must pay much attention to books we choose. Reading books do more good than harm to us. So let’s start reading more from now on!【解析】本文屬于話題作文,要表達(dá)閱讀的重要性。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?!玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點詞句,如not only...but also..., one of+the 形容詞最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù), be interested in, be good at, develop a good habit, pay attention to以及from now on等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。點睛:寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11.(陜西師大附中中考模擬)隨著中考的臨近,初三同學(xué)感到壓力很大, 有些人由于學(xué)習(xí)方法不當(dāng),盲目刷題或連 續(xù)熬夜,導(dǎo)致上課時精力不足,考試成績越發(fā)不理想。結(jié)合上述情況,請以 How to improve our study 為題寫一篇英語演講稿,向同學(xué)們提出建議。寫作要點:,課堂認(rèn)真聽講,做好筆記,課后按時完成作業(yè)。,合理安排時間。3. …… 寫作要求:,意思連貫,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范;,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,校名等; 70 詞,開頭給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)。How to improve our studyDear friends,I’m very sorry to hear that most of us have great pressure in study and don’t perform well in the Here’s my advice. Thanks for your listening!【答案】How to improve our studyAs middle school students, it is important for us to improve our study. What should we do to improve our study?First of all, we should get ready for new lessons before class. What’s more, we must listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class. Besides, it is necessary for us to finish our homework on time after class. Last but not least, try to make study plans for ourselves and make good use of our time. Only by doing these simple things can we improve our study.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,要表達(dá)如何提高我們的學(xué)習(xí)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如it is adj for sb to do, on time, make good use of以及first of all, what’s more, besides和last but not least。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫?!军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。12.(北京中考模擬)交流可以化解矛盾,增進(jìn)友誼。當(dāng)今交流方式很多,但人們之間的情感似乎越來越淡。學(xué)校英語專欄征文,主題是“Ways of Communication Today”。假如你是李華,你對此很感興趣,準(zhǔn)備投稿,談?wù)勀闳粘5慕涣鞣绞郊澳愕母惺?。提示詞語: face to face, chatting on line, discuss,appear 提示問題:How many ways do you know to municate with others?How do you usually municate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?【答案】There are some ways to municate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls. I think the best way to municate is the mobile phone. I