【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 聘信息，請你依據(jù)主要提示，給Animal Group的主席Mr. Mario寫一封郵件，并表達自己想當(dāng)志愿者的意愿。寫作要點：。 Group介紹自己。（ 1） 我是李陽，15歲。（2） 喜歡喂養(yǎng)小動物，運動，讀書。 （3） 樂于助人，有愛心。3．至少說出兩點你想要參加動物保護組織的原因。 Dear Mr. Mario , How are you doing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply!Yours Sincerely,Li Yang【答案】I really hope I can be a volunteer of Animal Group. I39。m Li Yang. I39。m 15 years old. I like feeding small animals, sports, reading. I am a very loving boy. I often help others. I like small animals and want to help them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系【點睛】這篇短文用正確的語句表達了每一個要點。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。8．（天津中考模擬）假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)東五一小長假的旅游回到學(xué)校。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。（1）5月1日天氣晴朗，我和家人開始了兩天的旅程。（2）早上7：30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā)，車程大約半小時。（3）上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識，并為朋友們購買了禮物。（4）第二天清晨，我們登上了長城，雄偉的長城是世界著名奇觀之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。（5）我的旅游感受……參考詞匯:京津城際鐵路 BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街 Wangfujing Street故宮 the Palace Museum北京烤鴨 Peking Roast Duck要求：（1）詞數(shù):80～100個。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，敘述事實的時候以時間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個有機的整體，同時要用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時候，寫作的時候要注意要點的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕洹⒎侵^語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（湖南中考模擬）假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護它們（不少于三條）。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運用比較級和最高級；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________