【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 聘信息，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)主要提示，給Animal Group的主席Mr. Mario寫(xiě)一封郵件，并表達(dá)自己想當(dāng)志愿者的意愿。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：。 Group介紹自己。（ 1） 我是李陽(yáng)，15歲。（2） 喜歡喂養(yǎng)小動(dòng)物，運(yùn)動(dòng)，讀書(shū)。 （3） 樂(lè)于助人，有愛(ài)心。3．至少說(shuō)出兩點(diǎn)你想要參加動(dòng)物保護(hù)組織的原因。 Dear Mr. Mario , How are you doing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply!Yours Sincerely,Li Yang【答案】I really hope I can be a volunteer of Animal Group. I39。m Li Yang. I39。m 15 years old. I like feeding small animals, sports, reading. I am a very loving boy. I often help others. I like small animals and want to help them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用正確的語(yǔ)句表達(dá)了每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。8．（天津中考模擬）假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)東五一小長(zhǎng)假的旅游回到學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。（1）5月1日天氣晴朗，我和家人開(kāi)始了兩天的旅程。（2）早上7：30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā)，車(chē)程大約半小時(shí)。（3）上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識(shí)，并為朋友們購(gòu)買(mǎi)了禮物。（4）第二天清晨，我們登上了長(zhǎng)城，雄偉的長(zhǎng)城是世界著名奇觀之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。（5）我的旅游感受……參考詞匯:京津城際鐵路 BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街 Wangfujing Street故宮 the Palace Museum北京烤鴨 Peking Roast Duck要求：（1）詞數(shù):80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，敘述事實(shí)的時(shí)候以時(shí)間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體，同時(shí)要用相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時(shí)候，寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要注意要點(diǎn)的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級(jí)的詞匯。注意所使用的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級(jí)的詞匯。注意所使用的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)以寫(xiě)一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過(guò)得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過(guò)的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開(kāi)放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過(guò)的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。短文應(yīng)由開(kāi)頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開(kāi)頭引出話(huà)題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過(guò)程；最后一部分簡(jiǎn)要描寫(xiě)一下自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見(jiàn)、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕?、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過(guò)的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫(xiě)了自己做飯給媽媽?xiě)c祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話(huà)引出話(huà)題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)了事情的過(guò)程；最后一段寫(xiě)了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱(chēng)敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（湖南中考模擬）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書(shū)。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)椋?）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們（不少于三條）。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。倡議書(shū)的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動(dòng)物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________