【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 語法規(guī)范，用詞準確。最后短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語的表達習慣，簡單句、并列句、復合句交替應用，文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。短文中還使用了豐富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to pare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting 。8．（甘肅中考模擬）發(fā)明創(chuàng)造改變了世界。作為一名中學生．假如你夢想當一名發(fā)明家，應該怎樣做才能實現(xiàn)夢想呢?請根據(jù)下面的漫畫提示，以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題，寫一篇短文。要求：1. 80詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮。（文章標題和開頭已給出不計人總詞數(shù)） 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱等相關(guān)信息。How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion, 【答案】How to Bee an Inventor?With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream e true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of ,interesting is the best can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the 39。s more important,Never give our 39。s the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.What I have list above is my answer to how to bee an inventor,and that is what I39。ll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“How to Bee an Inventor”為題，寫一篇短文?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That39。s……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要成為一個發(fā)明家；接下來介紹為了成為一個發(fā)明家，應該如何做；最后指出為了成為一個發(fā)明家，我要堅持做下去。此處play an important role in, e true, give up, such as等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（江蘇中考模擬）今年初《流浪地球》在中國火熱上映。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年，講述太陽即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對絕境，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問:希望是什么?班長回答:希望是我們這個年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語回復。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon，I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，要對來信中的問題作出全面的答復。同時在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。10．（河北育華中學中考模擬）每個人在成長過程中，都會遇到很所不同的困惑，但為實現(xiàn)夢想我們應該克服困難，解決問題?，F(xiàn)階段，你有什么困惑嗎？請以My Troubles at Present為主題，并根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語寫一篇短文。提示：（1）What are your troubles at present? （2）What will you do to solve these troubles?要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。 （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。 （3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。My troubles at presentDuring the process of my growth, I have met different 【答案】My troubles at presentDuring the process of my growth, I have met different am a teenager and I have a problem just like any other teenager too. I think my problem is relating to what would I do if I grow up?. This is something I really have no answer for am worried about how I do at school. I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don39。t there anyone who can help me? I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，請以My Troubles at Present為主題，并根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語寫一篇短文。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。例文點評：短文先列出自己的煩惱是什么，之后再寫如何解決這些煩惱。詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，為文章增色添彩。高分亮點：短語：relate to；grow up；be worried about；would like to do sth；find out；ask for help等。句式：I think my problem is relating to what would I do if I grow up?. I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don39。t like. I think I probabl