【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱．（4）…注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱【答案】Thank you，my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（嚴(yán)格要求）【高分句型一】During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指導(dǎo)）Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵(lì)）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文。【詳解】英語作文一般分為三個(gè)部分第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語老師的原因老師是一個(gè)認(rèn)真工作的人。老師對(duì)我嚴(yán)格要求。在我考試失利時(shí)鼓勵(lì)我。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，對(duì)老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因?yàn)槟愕恼n非常生動(dòng)有趣，對(duì)我們來說學(xué)好英語很簡單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來說做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當(dāng)我考試失敗的時(shí)候，你鼓勵(lì)我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．9．（江蘇揚(yáng)州教育學(xué)院附中中考模擬）你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱，時(shí)態(tài)等問題?？梢韵劝迅饕c(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來，然后再組合成文。寫作中注意語意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。10．（河南中考模擬）親愛的同學(xué)，三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請(qǐng)你以“My English Study”為題，請(qǐng)你談一談，這三年以來，你學(xué)習(xí)英語的心得體會(huì)。要求：、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟。條理清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。否則，試卷按零分處理?！敬鸢浮縈y English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.【解析】【詳解】短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English 。接下來敘述自己遇到的各種學(xué)習(xí)英語的困難：聽不懂老師的英語，記憶詞匯短語有困難等等。分別列出，行文流暢。用短語give up放棄，表示困難太大，難倒了自己。后來在老師的幫助下，克服了困難。逐步地Step by step，不斷取得進(jìn)步。最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it ，結(jié)束全文。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊——成長記錄袋時(shí)還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答卷。請(qǐng)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你過去三年中難忘的校園生活，并描述自己對(duì)將來學(xué)習(xí)生活的期望。文章應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：過去三年校園生活所得，真的很感激老師的幫助。，互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助。，盡自己最大的努力幫助有需要的人。4…….（補(bǔ)充12點(diǎn)所得）過去三年校園生活所失。3. ……（補(bǔ)充12點(diǎn)所失）今后的學(xué)習(xí)打算……（12句話描述自己未來的打算）要求：① 詞數(shù)100左右；② 短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；③ 文中需包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過渡詞句，使短文通順、連貫；④ 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：語言規(guī)范，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，書寫工整。My Unforgettable School LifeHow time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were v