【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 er. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to municate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.I39。m looking forward to your ing.Yours, Liu Bin【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，listen to the music，five days a week，so that，prepare for，for a while，of course，at the weekends，help each other，look forward to等。而固定句型it is important for us to municate with each other and share our happiness and 39。m very glad to know that you will e to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．（陜西中考模擬） 下周一下午輪到你在英語課上做課堂報(bào)告, 你打算把你爸爸最近網(wǎng)購(gòu)的音樂機(jī)器人（music robot）介紹給同學(xué)們。下圖是關(guān)于這個(gè)音樂機(jī)器人的廣告, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息寫一份發(fā)言稿。我是能聽會(huì)說的小音樂機(jī)器人,只要你對(duì)我說歌曲的名字, 我就能唱給你聽。我還有其他本領(lǐng)……參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買的音樂機(jī)器人。【詳解】這是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個(gè)音樂機(jī)器人，其次表達(dá)為什么“我”要介紹這個(gè)機(jī)器人，也就是對(duì)它的喜愛。在寫作時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。9．（江蘇中考模擬） 近年來，隨著智能手機(jī)的普及，越來越多的學(xué)生開始使用手機(jī)來完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論，為此，英文報(bào)Teens 將在下期開設(shè)專欄討論這一話題，你采訪了一些同學(xué)，寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下：支持者反對(duì)者學(xué)生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機(jī)操練說英語。自從使用手機(jī)以來，視力變差。一個(gè)理由……（12句）一個(gè)理由……（12句）你喜歡在用app學(xué)習(xí)嗎？給出你的理由……（23句），要求語句通順，意思連貫；；，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；，寫在試卷其他部位無效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干，這是屬于看法類的作文，那么在寫這類作文時(shí)，首先要分別寫出支持和反對(duì)兩方面的看法及原因，最后要說明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來進(jìn)行總結(jié)。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語：practice doing ；learn by oneself自學(xué)；lead to導(dǎo)致；it is adj. for us to do sth對(duì)某人來說，做某事是怎樣的；in a proper way以適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞?。亮點(diǎn)句型：There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ，這使我們更容易自己學(xué)習(xí)。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機(jī)以來，他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。10．（哈爾濱市第四十七中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是麗麗，還有不到100天就要中考了，今天為了讓我你們?cè)诰o張的學(xué)習(xí)之余得到放松，你們班召開了一個(gè)主題為業(yè)余時(shí)間你最喜歡做什么的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇日記，并談一下業(yè)余時(shí)間做運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)你的好處。 寫作要點(diǎn)： 1. 現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)：為了中考努力學(xué)習(xí)。 2. 討論的結(jié)果。 （1）百分之四十的學(xué)生業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡聽音樂。 （2）百分之三十的學(xué)生喜歡業(yè)余時(shí)間打電腦游戲（3） 你和一些同學(xué)喜歡做運(yùn)動(dòng)。 寫作要求： 。 2. 可適當(dāng)加人細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。 、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。 。 Dear Diary, Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. _________________【答案】Dear Diary,Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. Now we are studying for the senior high school entrance examination. Today we had a discussion about what do you like during the spare time.40% of the students are fond of listening to music. They strongly believe that it is a good way to make them relaxed. 30% of the students prefer playing puter games. As far as they’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exercise is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we’ll have more chances to get good grades.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述同學(xué)們業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡做的活動(dòng)以及運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)格林（Green） 先生是你班的一位外籍教師，在他回國(guó)前夕，學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會(huì)。請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇?dú)g送辭，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 格林先生是澳大利亞人，三年前來到我校教英語；2. 他與我們相處融洽，但對(duì)我們要求嚴(yán)格；