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ars. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書(shū),倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容,首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀,然后說(shuō)明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因,最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型,以免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,為使句子具有連貫性,可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級(jí)和最高級(jí);Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性,條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用,比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性,是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。8.(江蘇中考模擬) 為提升南京城市形象,我市已啟動(dòng)老小區(qū)出新改造工程。假設(shè)你是 Tim,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示,用英文向你的外國(guó)筆友 Jack 做簡(jiǎn)單的介紹。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意:;,意思連貫,條理清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;3 詞數(shù) 80 左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是描述老社區(qū)改造工程,話題較新?!驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文,所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給的比較零碎,不完整,所以考生需要結(jié)合實(shí)際情況補(bǔ)充完整,是文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。9.(浙江中考模擬) 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國(guó)家文明城市的號(hào)召,麗水市中小學(xué)開(kāi)展“文明城市,健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題,根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示,簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn),寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……(至少2條)注意:(1)詞數(shù)80100左右,短文開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇話題作文。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”;并給了一些提示和注意事項(xiàng):(1)詞數(shù)80100左右,短文開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),要用上提示詞,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí),最后寫(xiě)出你的觀點(diǎn)。注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意單詞拼寫(xiě),不要犯單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求?!玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文,本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);要點(diǎn)全面,結(jié)構(gòu)連貫;語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確,能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,沒(méi)有單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,字?jǐn)?shù)符合題目要求。10.(富順第三中學(xué)校中考模擬) 朋友是我們生活的組成部分,他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時(shí)候陪伴我們。你最好的朋友是