【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達。英國懷特學(xué)校下學(xué)期組織學(xué)生來你校學(xué)習(xí)了解中國文化，請你以李明的身份給該校校長Mr. Green寫一封郵件，介紹你校的相關(guān)活動安排及其理由。要求：1. 介紹不少于兩個有關(guān)中國文化的活動及安排理由；2. 詞數(shù)：80－120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考要點：（打乒乓、包餃子……）2. 安排理由（非常流行、帶來好運……）3. …….Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your ing.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國懷特學(xué)校的校長Green 先生寫一封信，介紹他們學(xué)校的學(xué)生來你校參觀時的活動安排以及理由。通過審題可知，這篇作文的主要內(nèi)容有以下幾個方面：首先介紹不少于兩個關(guān)于中國文化的活動，如打乒乓球、包餃子等；然后敘述安排這樣的活動的理由。根據(jù)表達要點充實寫作內(nèi)容，使文意完整。整篇作文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，根據(jù)表達的需要使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型。句式表達以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、定語從句等，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文主要分三段，第一段對懷特學(xué)校學(xué)生們的到來表示歡迎（題目給出），然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題，Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．。第二段是文章的主體部分，這一段中介紹了學(xué)校的活動安排：打乒乓球和包餃子，并闡述了安排這些活動的理由。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動詞不定式作目的狀語；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。最后一段作者用一句話表達了自己的期望。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次清晰，語句表達準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫。9．（江蘇中考模擬）寫作: 81. 目前，很多高中都開設(shè)了特色課程，涵蓋烘焙、舞蹈、鋼琴、跆拳道、足球等內(nèi)容，很大程度上增加了校園生活的趣味性，但也有人持不同的看法。 作為即將升入高中的你，對于特色文化課程有何看法？請根據(jù)下表的提示完成一篇短文并闡述你的觀點。Views on Special Courses贊同1. 有助于增加我們的技能；2. 有利于培養(yǎng)我們不輕易放棄的精神；3. ……不贊同1. 過多占用學(xué)生時間，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)；2. 需要投入更多的錢，增加家庭壓力；3. ……你的觀點1. ……2. ……要求：1. 表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2. 必須包括表格中所有相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：100左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入）4. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. What’s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldn’t give up easily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world.However, we can’t reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don’t have so many teachers on these courses. We can’t get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.Every coin has two sides. I think it’s good to have special courses. It’s not only impove our abilities but also give us much fun.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如carry on，first of all，like to do，play a game，this kind of，What’s more，give up，with the help of，so much time，pay attention to，on the paper，put up等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes,