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北京中考模擬)善待他人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。寫作時應(yīng)注意:首先英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語,而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型,以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主,穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句,改變文章節(jié)奏,提升文章檔次。自雙創(chuàng)以來,我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀,人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動,讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。點睛:(1)學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知此文時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來時。請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀愕募倨谟媱?。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如be glad to do,talk about,Tianjin International Marathon,hold on,in spare time,talk to,in English,at the same time,learn about,different cultures,be good for等。英語作文,要忠實于材料,不必擴展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯句。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the going to結(jié)構(gòu)的運用,使本文內(nèi)容豐富,表達(dá)流暢,是本文的最大亮點。What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。湖南中考模擬)暑假即將來臨,許多學(xué)生喜歡下河游泳。Views on Special Courses贊同1. 有助于增加我們的技能;2. 有利于培養(yǎng)我們不輕易放棄的精神;3. ……不贊同1. 過多占用學(xué)生時間,耽誤學(xué)習(xí);2. 需要投入更多的錢,增加家庭壓力;3. ……你的觀點1. ……2. ……要求:1. 表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2. 必須包括表格中所有相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 詞數(shù):100左右(文章開頭已給出,不計入)4. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。短文主要分三段,第一段對懷特學(xué)校學(xué)生們的到來表示歡迎(題目給出),然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題,Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them.。根據(jù)表達(dá)要點充實寫作內(nèi)容,使文意完整。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。構(gòu)思提綱。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. 我們既不去危險的地方,也不做危險的事情。提示:1. 遵守動物園的各項規(guī)定;2. 參觀時不要單獨行動;3. 時刻提醒自己安全第一;4. 遇到危險及時求助。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟,It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對這件小事進行了總結(jié),更使文章在思想上得到了升華。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如get together,enjoy the full moon, share our stories等。安徽中考模擬)李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。3.(根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄,邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。此處share sth with sb, need to do sth, take notes, want to do sth, at the same time, pay attention to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀銓τ⒄Z聽說機考有什么認(rèn)識,在考試中需要做什么以及你想對他們提出哪些建議。提示詞語:necessary, answer questions, take notes, retell, read a passage aloud提示問題: What do you think of theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test? What do they need to do in the test?What suggestions do you want to give them?Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something about theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test with you.Thanks for listening!【答案】Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。2.(文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一人稱。廣東中考模擬)假如你是班長李華,今天你們班對即將到來的暑假計劃進行了討論。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。假如你是李華, 請你給Jessica寫一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。文章時態(tài)使用正確,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,事件本身思路清晰,是一篇不錯的文章。要求:(開頭己給出,不計入總詞數(shù));2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名;4. 條理清楚,語句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范。使用了“neither…nor… 既不……也不……”。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹