【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school. On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see. Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．（山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)4月28日，國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席年中國(guó)北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開(kāi)幕式，提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”（fivepoint initiative on green development），為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國(guó)智慧。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”（Live Green, Live Better）? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）, 為?？庇⒄Z(yǔ)角”寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然，如：綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然，如：讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與，從身邊小事做起，如：適度節(jié)約，拒絕浪費(fèi)……；做到人與自然的和諧。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句：It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around us保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，make full use of充分利用， let’s take action!讓我們行動(dòng)起來(lái)9．（上海市澧溪中學(xué)初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）當(dāng)昨日重現(xiàn)之時(shí)，在腦海里的都是回憶。記憶中有沒(méi)有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。請(qǐng)選取一個(gè)方面，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）The following is for reference only（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意選取一個(gè)給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。：例文采用三段式：用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容：時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去式為主，敘述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷，敘述完整清晰。：短語(yǔ)：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。句型：such…that…；so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；whenever…引導(dǎo)的從句；used to do。10．（廣東中考模擬）近年來(lái)，我國(guó)校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學(xué)生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不 敢去學(xué)校，甚至?xí)霈F(xiàn)心理問(wèn)題等嚴(yán)重后果。 請(qǐng)以 “My opinions about school bullying” 為題， 寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1. 所給提示信息應(yīng)全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以 使行文連貫；2. 80詞以上。參考詞匯：心理問(wèn)題mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more