【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫?！军c睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in ，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。9．（浙江中考模擬） 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召，麗水市中小學(xué)開展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動。請你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……（至少2條）注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并給了一些提示和注意事項：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，要用上提示詞，并適當發(fā)揮，要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，最后寫出你的觀點。注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意單詞拼寫，不要犯單詞拼寫錯誤，字數(shù)要符合要求。【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，沒有單詞拼寫錯誤，字數(shù)符合題目要求。10．（全國中考模擬）書面表達健康的生活習慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習慣應(yīng)當是怎樣的呢?請根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。信息提示：。 , 不熬夜。 , 強身健體。，做網(wǎng)絡(luò)的主人。要求：根據(jù)信息提示, 把握要點, 適當發(fā)揮, 不逐字翻譯。字數(shù)在80詞左右。I think healthy habits are very important for us. Best wishes.Yours,【答案】I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bed for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should be in control of puter games instead of being addicted to them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇材料作文。請根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。【點睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團委正在開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護環(huán)境愛護花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說“謝謝”、“ 對不起”、“ 請”等禮貌語言……幫助他人助人為樂，積極參加志愿者活動……要求： 。，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First, we should choose to live a lowcarbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________.Third,_________________________________________________________________.Finally,________________________________________________________________.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風”的活動為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫出中學(xué)生應(yīng)從表格中的幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容詞+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定語從句、時間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習。12