【文章內容簡介】 moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。8．（山東中考模擬）書面表達下面的圖片描述了昨天下午發(fā)生在四年級三班教室里的情景。小林和小剛之間的對話，讓你 想到了什么？請根據(jù)你對圖片的理解，用英語寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文。內容包括：1. 完整描述圖片內容； 2. 簡要闡述你的觀點和看法。 寫作要求：1. 可以根據(jù)圖片信息，進行適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。 提示詞： 手提電腦 laptop【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to pare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們觀察圖片，將圖片中發(fā)生的場景用英語表達出來，是一篇看圖作文。首先學生們應仔細觀察圖片，了解圖片中發(fā)生的場景，弄清楚它主要想傳達的意思，然后用英語將這些內容表達出來。審題可知，這篇短文的內容應主要包括兩個部分：首先要描述圖片中發(fā)生的事情；其次對該事情闡述自己的觀點和看法。短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，第三人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應注意：首先短文內容應符合圖片表達的意思，不能會錯意，寫偏、寫錯；可以根據(jù)圖片信息適當發(fā)揮，使文章更加充實、完整。其次要注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。用從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。句式結構可以簡單句為基礎，穿插并列句或復合句結構。為提升作文水平，應注意應用高級詞匯和復雜結構。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)你暯映煞?，使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以及圖片信息，介紹了圖片中發(fā)生的事情，并對這件事發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內容符合題目要求，作者通過觀察圖片，正確了解了圖片傳達的信息，確定了文章的中心。文章內容完整、充實，敘述清晰、有層次。作者觀點明確，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱來敘述，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式，注意了過去式，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞過去式的變化，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確。最后短文中句式結構文章，符合英語的表達習慣，簡單句、并列句、復合句交替應用，文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。短文中還使用了豐富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to pare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting 。9．（徐州市西苑中學中考模擬）書面表達一日之計在于晨。同學們，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上學路上，當我們有充足的時間安排一天的學習生活時，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點點會給我們帶來許多好處。請你以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。要求：1. 包含所給信息，并適當發(fā)揮。2. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫整潔。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。開頭已給，不計入總詞數(shù)。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫一篇90詞左右短文。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（黑龍江中考模擬）假如你是吳浩，你的父母打算春節(jié)期間帶你和妹妹去北京。你們準備坐飛機去，請你給旅行社寫封電子郵件，咨詢有關航班，酒店和旅游景點的情況。留下你的電話，以便旅行社和你聯(lián)系。Dear Sir or Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Wu Hao【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help. Best wishes!Wu Hao【解析】【詳解】本文屬于應用文體，向旅行社詢問去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景點。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達以“My Weekend Housework”為題，寫一篇短文，談一談上星期天你做過的家務活，并介紹你喜歡做的家務活和不喜歡做的家務活，并談談你做家務的感受。提示詞：make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...要求：1. 參考提示語，可適當發(fā)揮；，語意連貫，書寫工整；、校名等；，開頭給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day. In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hat