【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 es? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，并且已給出了內(nèi)容提示，所以我們在寫作時要圍繞所給內(nèi)容提示展開。 根據(jù)作文要求，可以確定文章的時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。 在表達觀點時通常會用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出觀點的詞語。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出觀點，使文章更有條理，次序?！军c睛】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。首先內(nèi)容完整，第一段擺出事實，第二段說明別人的的觀點，最后說出自己的觀點，在表達觀點時有條理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的詞及短語，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有連貫性，及好的句型表達，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。8．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達某英文雜志社正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文，請從以下要點中選擇一至兩個方面，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇題為Thank you，my teacher!的短文參加此次活動．要點如下：（1）嚴格要求（2）耐心指導（3）熱情鼓勵；注意：（1）詞數(shù)80～100；（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱．（4）…注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100；（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱【答案】Thank you，my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（嚴格要求）【高分句型一】During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指導）Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個部分第一部分：開篇點題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語老師的原因老師是一個認真工作的人。老師對我嚴格要求。在我考試失利時鼓勵我。第三部分：再次點題，對老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因為你的課非常生動有趣，對我們來說學好英語很簡單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事…結構．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當我考試失敗的時候，你鼓勵我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．9．（天津中考模擬）書面表達校園安全問題越來越受到重視，為了確保學生的安全，學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學生的安全，學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應該和陌生人一起去，也不應該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。10．（黑龍江中考模擬）假如你是 Lin lei，與朋友Mary約好一起去歷史博物館，但因故不能赴約。請給她寫封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示歉意；（2）說明原因；（3）另約時間。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Mary,I’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. I have to go to see my friend in the hospital that morning. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Sunday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Lin Lei【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關信息向Mary解釋一下你不能赴約的原因。主要從表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟