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going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文。可以分三段寫。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?!驹斀狻?,看看有哪些要求?哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9.(北京中考模擬)“友善”是一種美德,它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們,請奉獻(xiàn)你的友善,為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認(rèn)識和理解,你平時做哪些友善的事情,以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind,politely, trouble, offer, proud,society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。10.(海南中考模擬)假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙,經(jīng)常熬夜,吸煙,很少吃早餐,也沒有時間鍛煉,所以身體不太好。6月17日是父親節(jié),請你根據(jù)你父親的情況,給他寫一封信,談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒔o他提一些具體的建議。要求:1. 意思連貫,語言流暢,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱等信息。3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右,開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。s Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示,確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。通讀材料可知,這是一篇向父親表達(dá)情感的寫作。因為是寫給父親的一封書信,因此人稱為第二人稱。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。要根據(jù)短文提示,把父親身體不好的原因?qū)懬宄?,并提出中肯的建議,表達(dá)出對父親的體貼與關(guān)愛,同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。11.(全國中考模擬)假如你叫李平,是一位成績優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生。你班班主任在安排座位時,讓成績好的學(xué)生和成績差的學(xué)生同桌,這在學(xué)生中引起了反響,班會課上大家就此進(jìn)行了討論?,F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)下表把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下,并說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。70%的學(xué)生贊成1. 學(xué)習(xí)成績不好,但擅長體育、藝術(shù);2. 相互學(xué)習(xí),發(fā)展友誼;30%的學(xué)生反對1. 部分學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生常常上課講話而不認(rèn)真聽講;2. 經(jīng)常問問題,影響別人。你的觀點(diǎn)……(至少發(fā)揮兩句)注意:1. 詞數(shù):90字左右,短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文需包括表中所有要點(diǎn),內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;3. 參考詞匯:成績差的學(xué)生 a slower student Dear Mr. Zhang.We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. Yours,Li Ping【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.However, 30 percent of the students don’t agree. They think some slower students always talk in class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower students often ask questions and they may influence others.I think I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can make progress together. YoursLi Ping【解析】 這是一篇圖表,你班班主任在安排座位時,讓成績好的學(xué)生和成績差的學(xué)生同桌,這在學(xué)生中引起了反響,班會課上大家就此進(jìn)行