【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 r reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門(mén)立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過(guò)介紹這個(gè)故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問(wèn)題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。8．（山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)下面的圖片描述了昨天下午發(fā)生在四年級(jí)三班教室里的情景。小林和小剛之間的對(duì)話，讓你 想到了什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)圖片的理解，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇 100 詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 完整描述圖片內(nèi)容； 2. 簡(jiǎn)要闡述你的觀點(diǎn)和看法。 寫(xiě)作要求：1. 可以根據(jù)圖片信息，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 提示詞： 手提電腦 laptop【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to pare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們觀察圖片，將圖片中發(fā)生的場(chǎng)景用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，是一篇看圖作文。首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，了解圖片中發(fā)生的場(chǎng)景，弄清楚它主要想傳達(dá)的意思，然后用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括兩個(gè)部分：首先要描述圖片中發(fā)生的事情；其次對(duì)該事情闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，第三人稱來(lái)敘述，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合圖片表達(dá)的意思，不能會(huì)錯(cuò)意，寫(xiě)偏、寫(xiě)錯(cuò)；可以根據(jù)圖片信息適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章更加充實(shí)、完整。其次要注意英語(yǔ)句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。用從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文水平，應(yīng)注意應(yīng)用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞郑刮囊膺B貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以及圖片信息，介紹了圖片中發(fā)生的事情，并對(duì)這件事發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，作者通過(guò)觀察圖片，正確了解了圖片傳達(dá)的信息，確定了文章的中心。文章內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述清晰、有層次。作者觀點(diǎn)明確，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱來(lái)敘述，正確使用了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式，注意了過(guò)去式，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。最后短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句交替應(yīng)用，文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。短文中還使用了豐富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to pare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting 。9．（河南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門(mén)的高度重視。假若你是來(lái)自九年級(jí)三班的李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份不少于80詞的倡議書(shū)。建議大家積極多參加體育活動(dòng)，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。要點(diǎn)：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開(kāi)展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（河南中考模擬）親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請(qǐng)你以“My English Study”為題，請(qǐng)你談一談，這三年以來(lái)，你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的心得體會(huì)。要求：、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟。條理清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。否則，試卷按零分處理?！敬鸢浮縈y English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.【解析】【詳解】短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English 。接下來(lái)敘述自己遇到的各種學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的困難：聽(tīng)不懂老師的英語(yǔ)，記憶詞匯短語(yǔ)有困難等等。分別列出，行文流暢。用短語(yǔ)give up放棄，表示困難太大，難倒了自己。后來(lái)在老師的幫助下，克服了困難。逐步地Step by step，不斷取得進(jìn)步。最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it ，結(jié)束全文。11．（江蘇中考模擬）假定你是David，來(lái)自美國(guó)，你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來(lái)信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實(shí)際用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: dav